Date: 9/1/2004 6:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 31255
I like the connections of the emotions to the ocean. I think water in general holds a lot symbolism to emotions. Great job with this one!  |
Date: 9/1/2004 6:52:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 37038
yes very true about water and emotions its 2 vital things us humans need lol glad you liked it  |
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Date: 9/1/2004 11:30:00 PM ( SD-Admin )
I love this and the symbolism . Very Good! |
Date: 9/2/2004 7:41:00 AM
From Authorid: 3835
Very nice (-: USM was lacking while you were away.  |
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Date: 9/2/2004 7:45:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 37038
thanks guys |
Date: 9/2/2004 7:53:00 AM
From Authorid: 21847
Congrats on the return! I'm mounting a comeback myself, you see. And Hack, too! At any rate, this was a great poem. It was soft and gentle, but it was also dark and deep. Like the ocean, is what I'm working around here. I'm looking forward to more!  |
Date: 9/2/2004 8:01:00 AM
From Authorid: 25828
nice lyrics 8-)  |
Date: 9/2/2004 8:10:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 37038
heather its not a song by alice in chains its a poem i wrote lol my name is alice in chains lol i am glad you liked it  |
Date: 9/2/2004 9:26:00 AM
From Authorid: 8024
Wow ...definately missed stuff like this ... Awesome is your way with words ...  |
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Date: 9/2/2004 10:38:00 AM
From Authorid: 25828
yes i just realized that 8-) i went looking to download the song LOL *-) nice poem |
Date: 9/2/2004 2:59:00 PM
From Authorid: 27534
It speaks... and it has style....a very fine work....and thanks for the read....  |
Date: 9/2/2004 5:34:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
It does me good to read your thoughts again, Alice in Chains.. The seashore..the depths...blue water...our souls..Thanks for the words, my friend...Write on...  |
Date: 9/2/2004 9:12:00 PM
From Authorid: 13979
Great symbolism here, great read, ty for sharing. -Diana aka  |
Date: 9/12/2004 9:23:00 PM
From Authorid: 28363
thanks for sharing your soul, good imprints are hard to find  |
Date: 10/4/2004 10:32:00 AM
From Authorid: 11952
wow, i have not kept up with your reading for awhile. and i must say it has improved dramatically. your words come together as true art.  |
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Date: 10/4/2004 10:34:00 AM
From Authorid: 11952
lol, omg. i just went and read some comments to my latest poem "Midnight Bathing" and u used the exact words "true art" in your reply. I havnt read those comments in weeks. There was no intended relation, that was weird. |
Date: 6/20/2005 1:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 51292
Wow that is an amazing poem..your words are so deep and full of meaning. I wish i could write as well as you do..Keep up the awesome work..80) WELL DONE!!!!  |
