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Lost In Darkness....by StormTracker5

  Author:  17487  Category:(Poetry) Created:(3/8/2001 2:47:00 PM)
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The old wood chair sits in the center of the room
Light from ceiling fixture, barely pierces the gloom
A small wooden table is sitting next to the chair
A lone figure is now found sitting there

A shot of bourbon clutched in his hand
What we're seeing is a sad, broken man
He sits thinking about how he got here
As the other hand swipes at a falling tear

What could it be that brought him to this place
Where darkness and sadness have taken up space
Could joy and happiness accompany him once more
Or has he given up and closed his heart's door

He swirls the bourbon around in the glass
As his mind begins to drift towards the past
A nice looking wife, three wonderful kids
That is, until is life suddenly hit the skids

They left one day, seemed to vanish without a trace
From that moment on, sadness was always on his face
You could see it in his eyes, hear it in the words he said
This sad and broken man, stuck in the darkness of his head

He gulped the shot of bourbon, grabbed the gun sitting there
He thought no one would miss him, thought no one would care
He heard a voice, "You are loved, get rid of all this pain"
He shook his head in disbelief, closed his eyes....BANG!

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Date: 3/8/2001 2:53:00 PM  From Authorid: 19092    StormTracker5, is everthing OK?? Please talk to us, you are my friend and are in my prayers. Your ability to write is a talent, I thank you for placing it here. God bless my friend, and keep him safe to write again.  
Date: 3/8/2001 2:56:00 PM  From Authorid: 21155    OMG Bro!! That was a way harsh poem!!! The feelings held within were definitly powerful and sooo sad. Beautifully written, but so tragic.....I just don't have the words to express how this poem touched me. Love ya bro!! Hugs kisses and much love to you and to ALL!! -Your sis, KQ a.k.a.  
Date: 3/8/2001 2:58:00 PM  From Authorid: 12239    Oh,ST5.This poem is so remarkably sad and heartbreaking.Alcohol takes a terrible toll on so many lives.Excellent writing!!!!!!You really put your heart and soul into this one.  
Date: 3/8/2001 3:14:00 PM  From Authorid: 7341    Whoa.....ST5....what a powerful poem....I hope all is well with you my friend *hugs*  
Date: 3/8/2001 3:17:00 PM  From Authorid: 19869    OMG!!! ST5, get rid of that thought of suicide!!! you have not lost everything. u have lost something big, but it is not everything. if u kill urself, what kind of a future will your great 3 kids have? how can a single mum bring up 3 kids without a father figure, and knowing he died because of her? plz dont do it. sadess does end and u will find happiness. never give up the fight. the quest is never over.  
Date: 3/8/2001 3:39:00 PM  From Authorid: 18103    OMG!! Bro, I am here for you. Contact me!!GRAYWOLF65  
Date: 3/8/2001 4:28:00 PM  From Authorid: 19869    hey great poem... no.. too good!! u scared me!! :P  
Date: 3/8/2001 4:43:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 17487    Thanks....some people face this hars reality every day...until they cannot take it anymore. This storm is ok, this is just something that I wrote. Thanks for reading it and showing such great concern. One of the key things that keep me coming back to this site is the love and kindness that every shows. Each and every memember of this site is a blessing to each other...  
Date: 3/8/2001 5:12:00 PM  From Authorid: 18887    OMG another sad, but great poem  
Date: 3/9/2001 11:59:00 AM  From Authorid: 26415    wow, stormtracker, what a harsh poem im not acostumed to seeing this from you, but nicely written, i enjoyed it just as i enjoyed all of you others..keep writeing i love your stuff...
Shorty G.
  
Date: 3/9/2001 12:03:00 PM  From Authorid: 26415    hey ST5 i tottaly agree with you, everyone, is a blessing to everyone, i love each and every person in this place and wouldnt come back also if it wasnt for the nice things everyone says, and just for them being here makes me come back time and time again..i totally agree..
shorty G.
  
Date: 5/18/2001 11:03:00 AM  From Authorid: 8024    Wow storm well written it shows how emotional some people can really get...Things have been rough for me but never this bad Thank God. Hope all is well have not heard from ya in a while ...your friend,  

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