Date: 2/9/2001 9:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 15621
I think its very good...and well written....thanks for sharing it with us  |
Date: 2/9/2001 10:15:00 PM
From Authorid: 17487
Very well written indeed. You could picture the battle as it was taking place. The persecution of religous beliefs will more than likely be a never ending batttle. StormTracker45  |
Date: 2/9/2001 10:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 16671
wow, I loved it, this is so so,,,,,,,, I cant think of the good enough words. You brought out in this poem what this girl must have felt during this very sad time of the killing of the Jews. Keep writing Ariah, you do very well.  |
Date: 2/9/2001 10:29:00 PM
From Authorid: 15033
Wow, you are good Ariah! Keep on writing, I can see you will go far...Love,  |
Date: 2/9/2001 10:47:00 PM
From Authorid: 11097
Very powerful and strong because it comes from the heart! Please Keep writing! With Love-  |
Date: 2/9/2001 11:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 600
Oh wow! This was incredible and very powerful! You did an awesome job with this! Keep up the awesome poetry Ariah!   |
Date: 2/9/2001 11:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 16989
thats a wonderfully touching story, very touching in deed-... -  |
Date: 2/9/2001 11:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 19220
I think that this is a great poem! Keep up the good work..IceQueen420  |
Date: 2/10/2001 12:58:00 AM
From Authorid: 17014
Ariah- you have a definate talent. Keep this writing up and I hope to see more of your work in the future!!  |
Date: 2/10/2001 5:39:00 AM
From Authorid: 5940
You put alot of feeling into this. I am not into poetry, but for what my opinion is worth, you did very well.  |
Date: 2/10/2001 8:21:00 AM
From Authorid: 16865
That is very good! Great visuals. You can really feel the emotions too.  |
Date: 2/10/2001 10:26:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 23604
wow, thanks for all of the comments folks!! it's great!! i never get this many, especially not so quickly!! thanks muchas!! -ariah  |
Date: 2/11/2001 1:13:00 AM
From Authorid: 12341
This is wonderful, I recently lost an old friend who was a victim of the halocaust and this brought to my mind what he must have endured, losing a wife and child and spending years in a concentration camp. WE MUST NEVER FORGET! You have incredible talent and you are using it in a great way!  |
Date: 2/11/2001 7:42:00 AM
From Authorid: 15976
This is very very very well written and touching!!!! I loved it!!! Keep writing!!!!
Much Love,  |
Date: 2/15/2001 10:29:00 PM
From Authorid: 17884
Wow the is very good and very Touching as Doc wipes tears from his eyes! You are a very good writer and this is very touching. Thanks for sharing it. Sincerely Yours Love Doc  |
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Date: 2/23/2001 3:31:00 AM
From Authorid: 28148
A very powerful piece of writing Ariah. I can see why Firstborn recommended it. Keep up the good work and a big thumbs up from Rudeboy |
Date: 10/27/2001 10:41:00 AM
From Authorid: 6798
Well written with a good message!  |
Date: 3/19/2002 4:46:00 PM
From Authorid: 26321
You did a very good job , I enjoyed your poem very much ! Raz aka  |
