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Door of A Fool...by StormTracker5

  Author:  17487  Category:(Poetry) Created:(2/9/2001 5:45:00 PM)
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The door of a fool opens wide
Allowing so many to come inside
He gives his whole heart to share
In hopes that one day you realize he does care

His hopes and dreams he puts aside
As he allows you to come inside
Instead of taking peace at what you've found
You persist to bash it into the ground

But rest assured it's the heart of a fool
The one that think's that everything is "cool"
In each other he thought you could confide
He always opens up, you always run and hide

A friendship that he will always hold dear
Yet you remain in the dark, vision not clear
A fools heart that you have ripped out
The fool that he was, he never did shout

Instead, he took everything in stride
Thinking, "cool in me they can confide"
One day maybe the fool will learn
Never to show so much concern...

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Date: 2/9/2001 5:47:00 PM  From Authorid: 600    Oh ST5!! This is so sad! Beautifully written, but so sad..... Hang in there bro! I'm here with ya. *hugs*  
Date: 2/9/2001 5:49:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 17487    *rushes to his sis' side* I know sis, I know....ST5  
Date: 2/9/2001 5:53:00 PM  From Authorid: 19545    this is soooooooo sad dragon flyer  
Date: 2/9/2001 5:53:00 PM  From Authorid: 7654    Sooooooo sad StormTracker5,I've been in that door a couple of times..Great poem !!!~~  
Date: 2/9/2001 5:55:00 PM  From Authorid: 19869    never stop caring. make mistakes and learn from them. a fool is only a fool until he learns what makes him a fool. ok... heres a cheesey example... a dentist who keeps his eyes closed is a fool. but he shudnt give up being a dentist. he should open his eyes and see what hes done wrong and correct it all. to run and leave the mess makes u an even bigger fool.  
Date: 2/9/2001 5:57:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 17487    Often times eddy it is the opening of those eyes that hurt the most...perhaps it is better in certain situations to keep one's eyes closed...just a thought...ST5  
Date: 2/9/2001 6:02:00 PM  From Authorid: 18887    wow!!! that is beautiful yet sad Spiritsof the Dead  
Date: 2/9/2001 6:02:00 PM  From Authorid: 22082    Oh man Dad...that wuz deep!! Keep writing! ~GodLifter Hades~  
Date: 2/9/2001 6:07:00 PM  From Authorid: 19869    ive tried 3 times to write a reply to ur last comment. i dont know exactly whats happened but someone has hurt u. u put trust in smoe1 and they betray u for no reason. its easy to say u r a better person then them but it doesnt take the hurt away. but that 1 person is only 1 person. just cos they cant see that what they r doing is wrong ,u should never let them ruin it for othes. u may have lost 1 person, but u still have many others who wont treat u like dirt and use u. or maybe u havnt lost them. trust is a bridge. it never reaches the other side and ur always building it. sometimes parts of the bridge fall.. dont stop building it and waste all that is left.  
Date: 2/9/2001 6:08:00 PM  From Authorid: 19092    Sadly sweet, King-Caspian  
Date: 2/9/2001 6:32:00 PM  From Authorid: 19435    It is sometimes better to remain behind closed eyes....I know. I have lived it. A sad but touching poem ST5, one I can relate too only too well.  
Date: 2/10/2001 5:44:00 AM  From Authorid: 16076    What a great poem storm...too bad that there are those of us who can relate all too well with it..but you see, the fool in the end is the one that realizes he/she had such a wonderful freind and we have already cut the ties of friendship with them...smile...Princess Ginger  

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