Date: 2/6/2001 4:12:00 PM
From Authorid: 22193
as usual tracker, a great poem, you do it so good, keep writin, iplan on doin this when i grow up, and mine does not even compare to yours.. thanks for posting..DruDRagon  |
Date: 2/6/2001 4:17:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 17487
Hey cool. Thanks DruDragon..that helps me a lot. I wasn't sure if I would be able to do something like this or not. ST5  |
Date: 2/6/2001 4:29:00 PM
From Authorid: 7341
Wooohooo! ST5!!!! Awesome! I love Westerns....lol....so.....I think this was wonderful!!!!  |
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Date: 2/6/2001 4:36:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 17487
*giggles* Thanks Corky...it was fun to come up with, but as I have said, I didn't think I could do this...who knew? ST5 |
Date: 2/6/2001 4:38:00 PM
From Authorid: 26557
WOW...I really liked this...You have great usage of words...Your stories are published...Right...cause if they're not they should be!!! I thought it was great
ooperstar  |
Date: 2/6/2001 4:42:00 PM
From Authorid: 18887
wow!! beautiful Uncle Storm Spiritsof the Dead  |
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Date: 2/6/2001 4:46:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 17487
Thanks Spirits..It was kind of new for me, but I thought I would take the chance. Ooperstar, your words touch me deeply. Of course my works are published, right here on USM..lol...I could ask you the very same thing. HEY EVERYONE, if you haven't read ooperstars poetry, ya gotta get to it. It's incredible. ST5 |
Date: 2/6/2001 8:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 600
Wow, this was awesome bro!! Except the music from the good the bad and the ugly kept running thru my head. lol. j/k This was magnificent as all of your writing is.   |
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Date: 2/7/2001 4:52:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 17487
The Good, The Bad, And The Ugly is one of my favorite movies TAC...lol...now I have that running through my head...ST5 |
Date: 2/7/2001 6:33:00 AM
From Authorid: 19869
thats really cool... but u asked for a lil abuse.. u can get that from me any day :P... emmm.. it desribes it all quite good but the only thing i thought could be done differently was the style u writ it in. it seems a lil plain and basic and would seem so much more western if u addopted their speech a lil more... u described it well but without the western way of speeking it seems like a western in the 21st century so doesnt quite get the right atmosphere... well it looks like im the 1st to critisize it but u asked for it :P... try another 1 and see how it goes... i would say it couldnt get any worse.... so i will... but id only be lying... :P.. its great  |
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Date: 2/7/2001 6:36:00 AM
From Authorid: 19869
the good the bad and the ugly... i can do it backwards... ur the ugly.. this poem is bad.. there is no good in it! :P... jk... |
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Date: 2/7/2001 6:45:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 17487
lol @ eddy...I knew I could count on you..I see what you are saying about the "speech" of it though. Great point. ST5 |
Date: 2/7/2001 6:45:00 AM
From Authorid: 18103
Great work bro! I kept hearing the theme for RAWHIDE while I read it. :-) I love westerns! Keep up the good work bro.GRAYWOLF65  |
Date: 2/7/2001 6:50:00 AM
From Authorid: 16442
That was a wonderful poem ST5. As you probably know I don't read a lot of poetry but this grabbed my eye and after reading it, I have to say, I am impressed. Good job!! ~MOONPRIESTESS~  |
