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Date: 3/23/2017 7:00:00 PM
From Authorid: 23963
LOL I don't think this was terrible or awful at all. Poetry should always be free flowing and creative. It is very nice to see you Celtic River     |
Date: 3/23/2017 8:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 42945
I think its a great poem Celtic River putting your feelings to paper is never easy but you have nailed it dear...  |
Date: 3/24/2017 5:58:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62927
Thank you. Thank you Hangman for picking up the Humor- My friend said I should leave humor alone... but seriously I keep trying. Thank you Zema- you are such a blessing and you picked up on the frustration. You all have me feeling much better.  |
Date: 3/26/2017 10:43:00 AM
From Authorid: 28363
I thought it was grrreat  |
Date: 3/29/2017 7:21:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
There is satisfaction in gathering it all up and forming it into words. I believe that has saved my head many times. Always enjoy reading you, Celtic River.  Write on.....  |
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Date: 3/31/2017 4:35:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62927
So good to see you. Hope you have a great day. |
Date: 5/3/2017 7:24:00 AM
From Authorid: 35051
I loved it, so raw, real, passionate and true.  |
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Date: 4/22/2019 11:10:00 PM
From Authorid: 16131
I actually had to read this 3 times but I do understand every word. I have kicked the fences but you get a cool cast for it. The crutches are cumbersome but great reminders of just letting what was done or said go. I have been hurting for years as I see that you have for the things people say and do to others specifically you, specifically me. It is time to learn as much as possible to let it go even if it means walking away or giving those who are offending the greatness of shunning them. Bonfires are great for ridding one of old episodes and memories as well as attacks we have both given and received. But honestly guilt is nothing to lightly say we deserve. It is a great way to turn ourselves to psychopaths. The I deserve going in the other direction of the scars or the things we long for become things we covet nd sometimes lose site that over time when put to the flame, they will also burn. Oh and the quiet time in the bottle whether figurative meaning shutting out the world, is so easy to long for. The other meaning of drowning sorrows is much to be regretted afterwards. As far as being glad to be alive, I am not sure how to accomplish that. I just know that it is a true shame to not. If you learn the trick to that, that's what you might be able to relate to us all with the greatest wisdom that is somewhat hard to find. Great poem and congrats on being poet of the week.  |
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