I would appreciate any help with this...
I'm writing a novel and I want to write about a person falling from the sky and going into an unconscious state. I wrote it in first person, but I want to write the novel in third person.
Does this third person point of view work or make sense?
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The body of a twenty-three year old male, fell out of nowhere from the darkened sky, softly bouncing on the wet grass, and then landing motionless. He didn't even out in pain, as if he were a doll, thrown by a two year who was going through a temper tantrum.
"Where am I, and why did I just fall from?" the twenty-three year old male thought to himself, as he laid on the cold wet ground. "Lift up" he commanded his legs, but they wouldn't move, they felt heavy as 100 pound weights. He then tried flapping his arms, hoping they would move, to raise himself up and wave down a passing motorist, if there was one, as he tried to move them, they too would not move.
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