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HALLOWEEN Contest #5....A..KEEKS PRODUCTIONS PRESENTS...DA CURSE OF DA MONKEYS PAW

  Author:  15157  Category:(USM Events) Created:(11/5/2011 4:18:00 PM)
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KEEKS PRODUCTIONS PRESENTS...

'DA MONKEYS PAW'

 

 

 

 

The following story is not True!

The names have been changed to protect those who wish not to be named...except for da Actors/Actresses!

Scene begins with a quaint country town store scene...

 

 

Mr Heckler Dell and his beloved wife Nani owned a General Store. They were kind and didn`t make much money. But during the years they owned the shop they managed to scrimp and save enough money to send their only son Kronk (yes a colorful name ...Heckler and Nani loved Walter Kronkite...so they decided to name him after him) to college.

One Day The Dells Asked Their Son To come For a Holiday Celebration...

Kronk asked his girlfriend Cissy P.C. what he should do because he wouldn`t be able to make it home.

 Kronk`s parents were very disappointed and wrote back telling him..."You must come home". Kronk  feeling very indebted to his parents sacrifices to him in the past-reluctantly consented. So Kronk and his girlfriend Cissy P.C. packed up for the long trip. 

Heckler and Nani waited patiently for Kronk to arrive. They didn`t know that he would be bringing Cissy PC with him for a surprize!

As Kronk and Cissy P.C. made their way around a winding Mountain pass named THE DIZZY JAY...they saw in the distance a pretty lady changing her car tire in the road.

Kronk being a gentleman (He took after his Dad Heckler :p) Stopped to help.

 The lady was tall but very pretty like I said...She introduced herself as Ms.Priss...Kronk looked into the car and saw she wasn`t alone..another pretty lady stuck her head out of the car...waved and said...I`m So Sweet Sofia...meanwhile in Kronk`s car... Cissy P.C. nervously kept nipping at her nails and looking around her for other cars.

All of a sudden a truck pulled up behind them.
A witty smiley girl jumped out of the cab and said.."I`m Punk Star chik!...Lemme help you guys!....Punk Star Chik was a God send because they were losing light fast.

Soon Kronk and CissyPc were on the road again...they felt happy that they made new friends.

THEN WITHOUT WARNING...

A sudden Cloudburst erupted!...The road was hard to see now!...Kronks eyes widened as the road narrowed even more!...Then they came around a darkened BEND IN THE ROAD WHEN..................

SCENE BLACKED-OUT

 

MEANWHILE BACK AT THE SHOP SEVERAL HOURS LATER

The time seemed to ebbed by slowly and past the time Kronk was suppose to get home. Mr and Mrs Heckler Dell were very upset thinking that Kronk disobeyed their request.

JUST THEN THE DOOR SOUNDED!

Nani dashed to the door to open it (thinking it was their beloved son Kronk!)

But it wasn`t!...It was two Policemen named LavenderWings and Hyperchick.  They hung their head to deliver bad news...Kronk had been in a terrible accident...(Cissy had somehow survived) but their beloved Kronk...Was...Dead!!!

 

The Dells were devastated!!! they blamed themselves tremendously.

SEVERAL DAYS AFTER THE FUNERAL

Heckler and Nani... went back to their shop to close it down for an extended period of time.

... And just as they started boarding up the windows of the shop.....

A MOST PECULIAR THING...

The door swung open...with a swoosh! A tall stranger in an overcoat and a hat walked in with a suitcase. The store suddenly got colder than usual.

I`m sorry said Heckers..."We`re closed"!!!!

 

The stranger didn`t pay no heed to Mr. Dell...and proceeded to walk up to the counter and laid down a suitcase right on top.

 Heckers went over to the stranger, and said "Look Stranger... I said we`re closed" The tall Stranger said "I don`t think you want to be closed for me" "You see I have something you might be interested in!" NO NO NO! Mr. Dell insisted "Please get OUT!"

 Then the tall stranger said my name is Kathy (Artist Formally known as Katsho)!!!

...(That name alone should send da chill up many a peoples back!!!)(Oh da very terror!!!) O_O

Kathy then said..."You just had a death...Correct?" Nani climbed down the ladder she was on, to go stand by her husband. Mr and Mrs Dell silently listened to da tall KATHY repeat herself.... "Correct?????????????"

  "Yes" said Nani... our son...she ended in a sob. The tall KATHY opened the suitcase..."Take this". She handed Mr and Mrs Dell something wrapped up in a cloth. And as fast as the stranger walked in was as fast as she walked out.

Heckers nervously opened da cloth. Inside was a dried up disembodied Paw of a Monkey. A note was attached that said...Three Wishes are the Law on dis Bloodied Monkey`s Paw!!!!!!.

DA ROOM WAS DEFFLY QUIET!!!

 

Three wishes...Heckers exclaimed!...Rubbish!!! Peeshaw!!!...Poppycock!!! And all that sort o Rot!!!!

 And with that tossed the Monkeys Paw in the Trash-can.
It went in wiff a thud!!!
 
Da Dell`s went to continue her boarding up the store windows. Then Nani said "You know...I wish we were finished with these windows already...I`m begining to get tired!

"AND WIFF DAT statement...

The boards all rose up by themselves and sealed on the windows! Oh my God! Da Dells said!!!!, and then Heckers ran to the trash-can and pulled out the Monkeys Paw.

Heckler looked at Nani, and said you know...we can undo what we did to our son! (Man! Is he nutz?) O_O

No! Nani said!....

"THAT WOULD BE AN ABOMINATION!!!!!!"

DUN DUN DUN!!!!! (lightening flashes)

 I guess your right...Heckers said.. I`m sorry. With that they closed up the shop and went home.

That night Nani couldn`t not sleep thinking of....

 DA DREADED Monkeys PAW!!!!

(lightening crashes again!!!)

 


 She snuck out of bed and walked in the dark back to the shop. She opened the door, and was shocked at the sight of HECKERS standing there in the dark store with the Monkeys Paw in his hands.

Hekler then said..."Oh you too? Huh?"

(Lightening Crashes again!!!!) o_o

Yes...said Nani. Da Dells stood there looking at the Monkeys Paw. You do it said Nani.

Then by all dat is Holy!!!....HECKERS made Da Dreaded WISH!!!!!!

..."I wish our son would come back to us!" Then there was silence then a tremendous KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK!...at the stores front door.

THUNDER CRACKED AND THE STORE LIT UP!!!

Heckers went to the door. He was about to open it!!!!!

When Nani shouted!...NO!!!!!!!...I`m sorry No!!!!!!! Its an abomination!!!!

Heckers shouted... "I must see my son alive again!...Nani said ...NO!!!!!

DONT open that door!!!!!

THUNDER CRACKED HARDER!!!


 Heckers Pulled away from  Nani and started to open the door. Then Nani ran back to the counter and picked up Da Dreaded Monkeys Paw...

And made the last wish..."I wish our son would go back and Rest in Peace!" With that Heckers opened the door!!!!!

... And A big wind hit Heckers with that was a rotting smell that filled the store.!!!!!

 It knocked Mr Heckers down!!! O_O.

At the door Da Dells found their sons College ring that they had buried with him earlier that week. DAT ONLY MEANT!...YES!..Kronk had surely come back from Da Dead!!!!!!!!

THE TERRIBLE LIGHTNING STORM ENDED ABRUPTLY AS IT BEGAN!

 

 

 

END SCENE!


CUE TWILIGHT THEME SONG.

O_O!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

THIS HAS BEEN A KEEKS PRODUCTION

 

disclaimer:..Not responsible for anyone who has a Deff or Dementia episode after reading this most Reeling Story in KeeKs Production History.

O_O

 

 

 


 

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Replies:      
Date: 11/5/2011 4:20:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157      
Date: 11/5/2011 7:07:00 PM  From Authorid: 64365    LOL! This was an excellent story. You did a great job. HUGS  
Date: 11/5/2011 7:26:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    Thank you Nani...I tried me best! Lol wanted to make it an aweful sort of fun!  
Date: 11/5/2011 7:26:00 PM  From Authorid: 5940    I can picture folks sittin' around the campfire makin smores while gettin' the daylights scared outta them......   
Date: 11/5/2011 10:52:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    Hi HeyL!...I know right..and in the morning their old nose wouldve grown back...like Wednesday said lol.  
Date: 11/6/2011 3:05:00 AM  From Authorid: 4995    I thought I was gonna be in it.   
Date: 11/6/2011 6:07:00 AM  From Authorid: 21435    Wow! Kiki Times, that was quite the production. I enjoyed it very much. What a character I play. My creativity squashed by overbearing parents. Tripping around the countryside with my babe, Cecilia. Rising from the dead, albeit a bit smelly..hehe. Of course, my all powerful "dry powder" deoderant will take care of that. Thanks for including me in your story, lady. Write on......  
Date: 11/6/2011 6:23:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    Sorry for excluding some usmers that my feeble eyes must`ve missed...don`t worry next KeeKs Production will include the rest!  
Date: 11/6/2011 10:01:00 AM  From Authorid: 14780    *yay* *claps* loved it!!! Im the paw handler!!!   
Date: 11/6/2011 12:51:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    LOL Kathy plus yer really tall!..Nice hat  
Date: 11/6/2011 1:59:00 PM  From Authorid: 64414    LOL...love it MommaKat!!!! ENCORE!!!
  
Date: 11/6/2011 3:30:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    !!!!  
Date: 11/6/2011 5:44:00 PM  From Authorid: 14314    Cool story!!!!!!!!!  
Date: 11/6/2011 8:32:00 PM  From Authorid: 5301    
...FANTASTIC! story Kiki!

I bit into my lip more than once as I was reading and you suspended me in a moment of uncertainty and dread.

For the record though, My last name isn't Dell...it's Packard.
Nani kept her maiden name and, combined with my surname, she's Nani Hewlett-Packard.
  
Date: 11/6/2011 8:35:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    lol yall are rich ones! And absolutely famous actors now  
Date: 11/6/2011 8:39:00 PM  From Authorid: 5301    
...questions keep coming to mind and it seems like the story was deliberately shortened to leave room for a more detailed sequel.

What kind of car was Kronk driving? Was he texting poetry to USM when he had the accident?

What did I have for dinner?
  
Date: 11/6/2011 8:45:00 PM  From Authorid: 5301    
...oopsy!
I failed to take into account that you had changed names to protect the innocent.

All...please disregard any of my previous statements concerning lineage.
  
Date: 11/6/2011 9:00:00 PM  From Authorid: 5301    
...and I REALLY hate to be the horse that poos in your parade but don't you think you overspent on the special effects?

The lightning was frighteningly effective the first time you blasted us with it but the second time was predictable.

I feel that the money could have been better spent on a different effect at a different point in the story,

I guess my opinion is pretty much just excess gassing on my part because you seemed to have killed the budget on the second flash.

Another point where you must be using artistic license is when you wrote "And A big wind hit Heckers with that was a rotting smell that filled the store.!!!!!"

That was me. Sorry about that. Nani made chili for dinner.
  
Date: 11/6/2011 9:02:00 PM  From Authorid: 64365    ^^^ROFLMBO!!!!!^^^  
Date: 11/7/2011 6:50:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    MMMM Chili...was it Hot or mild?...And I have to share my puter with a teenager..so my special effects kinda fizzled at da end...How many bowls did you have?  
Date: 11/7/2011 12:08:00 PM  From Authorid: 64365    My chili is always HOT!!! HOT!!! HOT!!!  
Date: 11/8/2011 6:27:00 AM  From Authorid: 13283    Good luck with your story in the Halloween Contest ! Go Texas ! Razzy aka  
Date: 11/8/2011 9:39:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    All my actors and actress were great!  
Date: 11/9/2011 1:54:00 PM  From Authorid: 49101    I FINALLY got through the whole ordeal with no interruptions, or unavoidable need to hide under me blankies. GREAT STORY!!!  
Date: 11/10/2011 5:27:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    Awes Thank you MsKit!......I love the actors/actresses...  
Date: 11/25/2011 11:49:00 PM  From Authorid: 998    Oh my gosh, this is one of the cutests ...errr, I mean ScArIesT stories I have ever read here on USM ... *laugh/tremble/laugh* ... LOL

It was all so good, I am now wondering why we haven't seen more Keeks Productions playing here in USM-ville ... well, I'm waiting for an answer ... *tap, tap, tap* .. .. ..

We need more .. We need more !!!
  
Date: 11/27/2011 7:35:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    YAY thankyou Gingie!.....KeeKs Productions has been limited to finding Actors/Actresses wanting to werk in such dramatic conditions!...We put em through alot O Love and Hugs...not many are willing to go through all dat!...  
Date: 11/27/2011 7:38:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 15157    Maybe the next KeeKs Productions can be...KRONK...DA RETURN 2 Da Monkeys PawPad!  

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