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Cyclone *ANGUS*

  Author:  63047  Category:(Poetry) Created:(7/16/2009 5:35:00 PM)
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Steam is rising from the floor
As the crowd shouts for more
Energy is pulsing all around
As bodies fly towards the ground
Those who climb back up survive
Some won't make it out alive
Take your chances, jump right in
Or sit back and watch the fun begin

Cyclone
Circling around like sharks
Cyclone
Madness rages in the dark
Cyclone
Spinning wildly out of control
Cyclone
The pit's a screaming torrent of souls

Fists find themselves flying about
The music is overpowered by screams and shouts
Fire in the center, aggression overload
The paces picks up and the place explodes

Cyclone
Winds start to pick up
Cyclone
The energy erupts
Cyclone
Bodies lying tangled
Cyclone
The enviroment mangled


-I am currently writing a thrash song, so I had the whole thrash idea come to mind. This is a somewhat generic song about a mosh pit, so it's bound to sound like another metal song out there (lyrically). It was still fun to write though

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Date: 7/16/2009 6:28:00 PM  From Authorid: 21435    Loved it, man! Dig on that high energy! Write on, Angus Young.  
Date: 7/16/2009 8:22:00 PM  From Authorid: 42945    Great description of the mosh pit as far as my grandaughter is concerned...she said "awesome"...  
Date: 7/16/2009 8:29:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 63047    Thanks Kronk and Zema, tell your granddaughter I said thanks haha  

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