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The King [ii].....................................................Lady Blaze

  Author:  56840  Category:(Fiction) Created:(8/14/2008 8:01:00 PM)
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Far away, in a valley among northern peaks, a different kind of storm was not lifting, but steadily descending. The king was dying.



He was not wrapped in his royal embroidered robe, laid upon heavy goosedown pillows before a roaring fire, while royal physicians saw to his comfort til his last breath. He was not old enough for that sort of passing. Cardus, King of Amilainn and Rosewind Keep, was dying a long slow death, under a slate gray sky in a land not his own, of three well-placed arrow wounds. A week before his fortieth birthday.

The white-veiled face drew back yet again upon the great black bow, to loose a fourth arrow as a parting gift. And he and his own vanished under snow laden evergreens, as swiftly as they had appeared.

Long had he suspected the betrayal. Why had he not brought his doubts to his advisors? Ah, but he had wanted to trust them. And there had been passing possibility of a traitor.

Cardus, you fool. To trust those who have never trusted anyone. Such folly. Such danger. And what now? His kingdom had little hope. Marc, the Steward of Rosewind and his good friend, had been manipulated into resigning, he could see that now. He would have brought stability to the kingdom, until Cardus' son Curt became old enough to rule. His son. . .oh, his poor young son, who would become a puppet, or be killed as the crown was fought over. And Anne. With her dancing eyes and rough but gentle hands, his wife, his queen, still so lovely, what would they do to her?

“No,” he whispered.

But none broke the silence to answer him. No one else had been left breathing in his company.

And grief overtook the king, while death gathered.







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Date: 8/21/2008 3:29:00 PM  From Authorid: 21903    Wow Lady Blaze! I can't believe I waited so long to catch up on this part! This was so awesomely (is that a word?) written! I really enjoy this story; I need to get on USM more often to keep up. I can picture the scene so clearly and the loneliness in the end is so eery! Great work again *slaps a high five*  
Date: 8/24/2008 6:34:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 56840    Oh, I'm so glad you are enjoying it! It's slow going so far, but I think it's one of my better told stories.  
Date: 8/24/2008 7:08:00 PM  From Authorid: 64365    Absolutely fantastic! I could feel your words. HUGS  
Date: 8/24/2008 7:40:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 56840    Thanks, Nani! It's always nice to hear encouragement from readers! Keep writing..  
Date: 10/27/2008 4:10:00 PM  From Authorid: 28363    Excellent story  

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