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DELIVER US FROM EVIL Segment 1: The Blackened Pride

  Author:  63219  Category:(Scifi) Created:(6/6/2008 10:18:00 PM)
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DELIVER US FROM EVIL Segment 1: The Blackened Pride



Lightning struck among the grey bouldered-land of Laribel, smoke rising from the rocky hills. Hell on this Earth, the land was, the land of no return, the land of merciless judgement, the land of the bloody rule. A lord and his army, the Allegiance of Blackened Chivalry, enforced these lands, underneath a blood-red sky and stone and bouldered land throttled by an iron fist. This lord, the leader of this army of charred brimstone demons, was named Racsan Amabo. He stood tall among his army of stone-grey demons, a demon, no, a devil, himself, standing in silver, spiky armor with dark purple skin with golden eyes behind a silver mask that covered all his head except ears and neck. The mask hadprotruding horns on top of them.

Racsan Amabo looked among his homelands, observing the strenous work his army had previously been up to, securing the lands from outside presences and making sure the lands looked tidy to his abiding. Blackened lakes, dark grey soil and rocky hills, a volcano or two. He was satisfied for now. 'Just keep on the lookout,' he told his army in a deep, growling voice with a sound like a belching warthog, and headed back to his quarters in a long, dark cave. Racsan told himself thoughtfully, 'I knew my spiteful ancestors and allies would pay for ignoring my means of maintaining peace in this miniscule world. Someday soon, it will be mine, but there is still much work to be done.'

He then strutted over to a wooden door in the cave and opened it. His personal tasks room, a large, wooden desk sat near a corner of the room, which he approached, pulling out a piece of wood and a match. He struck the match against the wood quickly and then enflamed one end of the piece of wood, where the flame just sat and consumed no more. 'Flame, flame, burning the wood. I know almost all I can, you know I should. If anyone else could assist, who could?' A raspy, hoarse voice came from the flame and said, 'The golden coin in the biome of lint'....

With the flame going out, Racsan started looking puzzled...

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Date: 6/6/2008 11:26:00 PM  From Authorid: 21903    Very awesome start to a tale that promises great things! I am excited to read more! Great name for the leader.   
Date: 6/7/2008 1:54:00 AM  From Authorid: 42945    Very good Ryan...I will look forward to reading more of this story hun....*hugs*  
Date: 6/10/2008 10:10:00 AM  From Authorid: 19613    Is it simple coincidence that the antagonist’s surname is an anagram of “Obama”, and he rules a desolate land which is an anagram of “Liberal”? I look forward to part 3.  
Date: 6/10/2008 10:21:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 63219    Good eye Dark Phoenix........*claps*, Lol. But Laribel speeled backwards sounds slightly different from 'liberal'. Surely putting John McCain's name backwards would sound fitting since it wouldn't come out much...  
Date: 6/10/2008 10:22:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 63219    spelled*  

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