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Cheap..............Lady Blaze

  Author:  56840  Category:(Poetry) Created:(9/5/2007 6:28:00 PM)
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I listen to the conversations, but all I hear in return is music
they say it bypasses certain neural pathways and
goes straight to something else
that which then makes you wonder why you're
crying

it's just liquid, cheap.
they give it to the actors in eyedrop bottles and you watch
but forget about
the music

when it comes back to you it is too late
the echo has already done its damage, leaving you replete
trying to remember if the tear duct manipulation
was consentual

it's just liquid
cheap..




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Date: 9/5/2007 6:34:00 PM  From Authorid: 63041    Now this is truly brilliant. The impact of the lines..."it's just liquid, cheap" was so huge, and the repetition of that just bound the entire thing together. And the 3rd stanza, well, it just blew me away! This is one of my favorites now. Thank you for the grace of your words.  
Date: 9/5/2007 8:58:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 56840    Thanks.... Hehe, you're such a flatterer.  
Date: 9/6/2007 2:06:00 AM  From Authorid: 21435    "crocodile tears" Hey there, Lady Blaze. Always a pleasure, my friend. Write on....  
Date: 9/6/2007 6:18:00 AM  From Authorid: 56359    You're such a wonderful poet Lady Blaze. I really enjoyed this one  
Date: 9/7/2007 11:45:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 56840    I'm glad you two enjoyed it.. Keep writing..  

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