Date: 6/3/2007 12:23:00 AM
From Authorid: 42945
Awwww how sad is this and the sad part about it is that it's happening most probably right at this very moment to some poor child...you've written this very well PC, it would make for a great advertisement for Child Abuse!!!  |
Date: 6/3/2007 3:47:00 AM
From Authorid: 10657
great job on this one PC. I actually thought of several scenarios at first child abuse, then I thought of spousal abuse, and finally I thought wow!!!  |
Date: 6/3/2007 9:49:00 AM
From Authorid: 4995
This should be on a poster somewhere. I was stricken by it. The message comes across like a freight train.  |
Date: 6/3/2007 11:02:00 AM
From Authorid: 63831
Wow..great job writing this! its really sad that it actually happens, maybe people should have these things written somewhere to get the point across..thanks for posting!  |
Date: 6/3/2007 1:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 23963
Very angry poem, but a great one. I felt that this poem had a good message to it. Thanks for sharing this poem with us PhantomCrow. *Hugs*   |
Date: 6/3/2007 4:55:00 PM
From Authorid: 59418
Gosh, that's terribly sad   |
8905 Category:(Poetry) Created:(6/2/2007 11:55:00 PM)