Go to Unsolved Mystery Publications Main Index Go to Free account page
Go to frequently asked mystery questions Go to Unsolved Mystery Publications Main Index
Welcome: to Unsolved Mysteries 1 2 3
 
 New Mystery StoryNew Unsolved Mystery UserLogon to Unsolved MysteriesRead Random Mystery StoryChat on Unsolved MysteriesMystery Coffee housePsychic Advice on Unsolved MysteriesGeneral Mysterious AdviceSerious Mysterious AdviceReplies Wanted on these mystery stories
 




Show Stories by
Newest
Recently Updated
Wanting Replies
Recently Replied to
Discussions&Questions
Site Suggestions
Highest Rated
Most Rated
General Advice

Ancient Beliefs
Angels, God, Spiritual
Animals&Pets
Comedy
Conspiracy Theories
Debates
Dreams
Dream Interpretation
Embarrassing Moments
Entertainment
ESP
General Interest
Ghosts/Apparitions
Hauntings
History
Horror
Household tips
Human Interest
Humor / Jokes
In Recognition of
Lost Friends/Family
Missing Persons
Music
Mysterious Happenings
Mysterious Sounds
Near Death Experience
Ouija Mysteries
Out of Body Experience
Party Line
Philosophy
Poetry
Prayers
Predictions
Psychic Advice
Quotes
Religious / Religions
Reviews
Riddles
Science
Sci-fi
Serious Advice
Strictly Fiction
Unsolved Crimes
UFOs
Urban Legends
USM Events and People
USM Games
In Memory of
Self Help
Search Stories:


Stories By AuthorId:


Google
Web Site   

Bookmark and Share



my fantastical surreal life ----NKA

  Author:  42792  Category:(Poetry) Created:(7/15/2005 5:47:00 AM)
This post has been Viewed (1325 times)

Where did the time go
Passing us by like lightning
Things that you said were
Awfully too predictable
I tried so hard not take it in
But then I got caught up
It’s just so hard to walk away
Staring at pieces of potential
Should have learned by now
Should be able to recognize
The proverbial controlling side
Of my fantastical surreal life
Your emblematic vicious attitude
Outshines your compliant side
But my mind’s eye penetrates deep
Embellishing your insignificant traits
If only you would have seen
You had complete control of me
You refused to take the wheel
My fantastical life, surreal

You can join Unsolved Mysteries and post your own mysteries or
interesting stories for the world to read and respond to Click here

Scroll all the way down to read replies.

Show all stories by   Author:  42792 ( Click here )

Halloween is Right around the corner.. .







 
Replies:      
Date: 7/15/2005 7:14:00 AM  From Authorid: 39107    Beautiful piece. *bookmakred* Write on.  
Date: 7/15/2005 8:39:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    Thanks, SPG.  
Date: 7/15/2005 9:12:00 AM  From Authorid: 34912    There are so many good lines here and it really demonstrates your literary depth, NKA. Don't let it go to your head now(), but the subtley and nuance in what you write just gets better and better. "But my mind’s eye penetrates deep,
Embellishing your insignificant traits" What way to say this and how true it is. Nice work. I really liked it. You rock!
  
Date: 7/15/2005 9:31:00 AM  From Authorid: 13729    Awesome words, great writing as usual.......  
Date: 7/16/2005 3:47:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    Thanks, Ritzbe  
Date: 7/16/2005 3:47:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    thank you, PS. I really appreciate your well thought out reply  
Date: 7/16/2005 6:40:00 AM  From Authorid: 21435    Our minds file all things away. Memory is long and the tide floods and ebbs same, as it did during the time of the great reptiles. I think that you are another one of the immortals, NKA. I just love it when reading draws that sorta stuff out of me. Thanks for the read, lady. Write on...  
Date: 7/16/2005 1:25:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    thank you for always reading my work, Kronk  
Date: 7/17/2005 1:25:00 AM  From Authorid: 63187    sweeeet poem maan........Darth_Vader_Brad  
Date: 8/13/2005 3:06:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42792    thanks  

Find great Easter stories on Angels Feather
Information Privacy policy and Copyrights

Renasoft is the proud sponsor of the Unsolved Mystery Publications website.
See: www.rensoft.com Personal Site server, Power to build Personal Web Sites and Personal Web Pages
All stories are copyright protected and may not be reproduced in any form, except by specific written authorization

Pages:1014 848 801 84 1103 1336 670 73 1149 1560 913 194 232 1579 1454 381 1046 210 1139 590 1425 1254 1468 823 666 917 1118 1549 1455 1242 467 1337 994 1526 119 1271 120 1351 1429 186 39 806 1031 1483 1043 1112 158 1160 38 851 1571 234 1270 583 482 1571 250 1481 1481 702 76 1146 657 1057 961 1041 127 785 1356 1508 560 782 1080 400 501 312 35 100 896 1034 543 552 419 231 460 681 794 427 1109 218