Date: 2/21/2005 2:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
great flow to this one NKA, I liked  |
Date: 2/21/2005 2:29:00 PM
From Authorid: 62821
good poem! dan  |
Date: 2/21/2005 2:34:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thanks, Tim It should have some flow, it's a song that I've been toying with but can't seem to finish so I just said to heck with it and put it in the poem pile.  |
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Date: 2/21/2005 2:35:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thanks, Dan! |
Date: 2/21/2005 3:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 28946
Hack's right, it does have good flow and a nice rhythm. The words touch to the soul though and leave a sadness.  |
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Date: 2/21/2005 4:21:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
I felt sad writing it, Penny. That is kind of why I couldn't complete it. |
Date: 2/21/2005 6:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 63041
These words speak loudly NKA. A wonderful ballad it would be...or a hard hitting rock song. Finish it, maybe its the closure you need. A wonderfully written piece of honesty here. I loved it.  |
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Date: 2/22/2005 5:47:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
thank you, SA. I'll try to finish it. I don't think I can right now but maybe soon |
