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Our Last Cry ....(bordering lame) ... ~ SpaceCase

  Author:  53836  Category:(Poetry) Created:(2/15/2005 8:27:00 PM)
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I remember dancing with you
Across the hardwood floor
How our bodies moved
In perfect time

I thought I must be dreaming
But life was in full swing
And saying goodbye
Was such a crime

But I go on loving you

And one day I know my dreams will come true
You'll have found fame
For all of my pain how I've tried

You'll be singin'
In your voice, the pain will be ringin'
about our last cry

I remember lying in your arms
Upon a feather bed
Melted together so sublime
And the sound of gentle rain

I thought we would be forever
Together burning the world
Down with
Our passionate flame

But I go on loving you

And I know your dreams are coming true
And when I see you on stage
I try and forget the pain
Of knowing we have already had
Our last cry


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Date: 2/15/2005 8:29:00 PM  From Authorid: 63026    this was beautiful~joe  
Date: 2/15/2005 8:31:00 PM  From Authorid: 45397    Spacie nothing lame about this poem one bit <hug>  
Date: 2/15/2005 8:32:00 PM  From Authorid: 28946    Stacie you brought tears to my eyes with this one. Are you putting this to music?  
Date: 2/15/2005 8:33:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 53836    Penn, there was music in my head, but I can't try it out until the A.M. Thank you all...and HUGS & MUCH LOVE   
Date: 2/15/2005 8:44:00 PM  From Authorid: 34912    Wow, Spacie!!! This was so magical, tragic and yet beautifully etherial all at the same time. It felt sooo good to read this at some points (Upon a feather bed
Melted together so sublime), I was just swept away. And then the sudden manic lows into present tense that continually contrasts the refelcted memories are so bitter to taste after the richness in the sweet recollections conjured throughout these lines. Very nice!
  
Date: 2/15/2005 8:51:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 53836    ah yes...torturous love...the only kind that suits me, it seems...but then, who would twist your very soul with these thoughts if I weren't to experience such forlorned moments Man, get your boots on...it's gettin' deep in here now HUGS  
Date: 2/15/2005 8:53:00 PM  From Authorid: 18928    not lame!! not even close to the boarder! lol great work here!  
Date: 2/15/2005 8:54:00 PM  From Authorid: 63041    Lame..where? Your a space case..not a lame duck...~hugs you senseless~ I missed you...and this was absolutely lovely. The longing and melancholy was felt.  
Date: 2/15/2005 8:58:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 53836    I want a USM alter-ego taggie....Melancholy Molly Thanks you guys...I guess I underestimate my stuff, LOL...*BIG HUGS*  
Date: 2/16/2005 1:41:00 AM  From Authorid: 59418    Awwww, This is absolutely beautiful Stacie   
Date: 2/16/2005 5:48:00 AM  From Authorid: 46320    Put it to music and sell it to the country singers! This is really great Space. I loved it. Be Good...  
Date: 2/16/2005 9:54:00 AM  From Authorid: 62872    So sad and soulful thank you for the great post....Thunder Wolf  

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