Date: 2/13/2005 6:45:00 AM
From Authorid: 63041
Your phrasing, use of the language...its amazing. I really loved this one..."Abhorrence skulks upon this place Dwelling within, our final chance" I love these lines.
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Date: 2/13/2005 6:49:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thank you very much. I'm very pleased that you understand my words. I write a lot poetry that is driven more by simplicity however; I find that when I write something as profound as this poem; it is typically more truthful and in line with my actual feelings.  |
Date: 2/13/2005 7:14:00 AM
From Authorid: 21435
Dig on the eagles.."You can check-out any time you like, but you can never leave." ...No armour can save us from the "red death." Oh Lord! The Eagles, Poe and NKA!! I like what you do, lady. Write on....  |
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Date: 2/13/2005 7:35:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
That is quite the compilation, eh, Kronk? Thanks for reading |
Date: 2/13/2005 8:07:00 AM
From Authorid: 45397
nicely written  |
Date: 2/13/2005 8:33:00 AM
From Authorid: 62599
The ramblings of a madwoman, I say! Nah, not really, its just a really cool poem.  |
Date: 2/13/2005 11:46:00 AM
From Authorid: 34912
This drew me in instantly! I've had to read this several times over. There is a deep universal phiosopphical premis I'm still trying to decifer here. This has so many layers here to me. Excellent, NKA! You write so well!!  |
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Date: 2/13/2005 12:13:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thanks, Wyn |
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Date: 2/13/2005 12:14:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Autopilot, I am sure there is some truth to your first comment, LOL! |
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Date: 2/13/2005 12:15:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thank you, PS. I need to do some catching up on my reading around here. I think there are a lot of good writers here. There are a lot of really bad ones, too but I guess it's nice that they try, right? I think I am mediocre at best. I need to work on my writing skills more. |
Date: 2/13/2005 2:22:00 PM
From Authorid: 28363
wow, classic indeed. Thats not ardor, thats musk from the scent glands of a seven foot elk.  |
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Date: 2/13/2005 2:55:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
LMAO! That's darn scary! Long time, no see. I miss talking to you! |
