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Eating Disorder Villanelle

  Author:  51070  Category:(Poetry) Created:(2/10/2005 9:24:00 PM)
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My goal in life is to be thin.
Right now, I feel alone.
No matter what, I will win.

The ads make my head spin.
I release a nervous moan.
My goal in life is to be thin.

On the inside, I'm cryin'.
No, I can't eat a scone.
No matter what, I will win.

Binging and purging is a sin.
On the bathroom floor, I lie prone.
My goal in life is to be thin.

To a skeleton, I'll be akin.
I think I see a bone.
No matter what, I will win.

I lie in a hospital...dyin'.
I'm as still as a stone.
My goal in life is to be thin.
No matter, what I will win.


*Note: There seems to be a misunderstanding with this poem. I don't have an eating disorder. It's from the point of view of an anorexic victim. It was inspired from a book I read about a girl who developed an eating disorder after she got really fat.

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Date: 2/10/2005 9:28:00 PM  From Authorid: 28946    No Sweetie, you won't win. Eating disorders make your teeth and hair fall out. You are talented in writing but your words made me cry. Hugs.  
Date: 2/10/2005 10:06:00 PM  From Authorid: 62753    If you have a eating disorder, you won't win, and you need to seek the help and advice from someone who is educated in this area.... If you wrote this because of someone you know, they need help!  
Date: 2/11/2005 12:45:00 AM  From Authorid: 62893    A very strong poem. I have been dealing with this since highschool  
Date: 2/11/2005 11:39:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 51070    Dude, you guys are missing the point! I DON'T have an eating disorder! I wrote it from the point of view of a chick with an eating disorder. Sheesh...I must be darn good at taking on other viewpoints and voices if I can arouse these responses. Heh heh heh...  
Date: 2/11/2005 11:45:00 AM  From Authorid: 28946    Yes, you wrote an outstanding poem on what a sufferer feels sometimes. To some, this disease causes death.  
Date: 2/11/2005 12:12:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 51070    I think bulimia can trigger something or another that can cause a heart attack. It might be potassium levels: I'm not sure.  
Date: 2/11/2005 3:38:00 PM  From Authorid: 63041    The disorder is such a hardship on all involved...especially the self esteem...you voiced this fear and this unsatiable need so very well. Bravo for putting such a large issue into such honest words.  
Date: 2/12/2005 11:55:00 PM  From Authorid: 19625    *nods* Erin-  

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