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Please Please Please Help me edit my paper (STINA)

  Author:  16916  Category:(Discussion) Created:(12/7/2004 8:46:00 PM)
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Okay I wrote this paper that is due tomorrow morning. My eyes are tired and I dont know if there are any changes I should make. Could you please help me out and see if you spot any typos or missed spellings or anything..Thanks so much!!! Here it is

Radio

The movie Radio was released by Columbia Tristar Videos in 2003. Radio is an inspirational story. The main actor, Cuba Gooding Jr. plays a developmentally disabled man that struggles to be accepted by the town in which he lives. The football coach, played by Ed Harris the supporting actor, invites Radio to join his family at the climax of the film when Radio's mother died. At the end of this movie, Radio is invited to come to Hanna High school for as many years as he would like. This was a wonderful movie. In this movie, the acting was spectacular, the music fit nicely and the setting was perfect.

The acting in this movie was spectacular. The main character played by Cuba Gooding Jr. was mentally challenged. Mr Gooding did an exquisite job. He played the role as if the character's life was his own. The look in his eyes was a mixture of innocence and trust. Mr. Gooding's acting abilities in this movie have shown a wider range compared to his other works, he usually does comedies. Coach Jones, Hanna High School's football coach was played by Ed Harris. Mr. Harris convinced viewers that he actually was a devoted family man and coach.

The music selections in this movie were very fitting. The music created the mood. It created suspense, sadness and happiness. Music played a huge role in this movie. Without the music the movie would not have had the same effect. They played uplifting instrumental music during times of team victory, they played slower music such as at the death of Radio's mother. At other times the music created suspense such as when Radio was tricked into going into the girls locker room.

The setting for this movie was perfect. Most of the scenes in this movie take place at Hanna High School. Hanna was a typical high school. The setting works out perfectly because Radio goes through the troubles of a normal high school student. If it had taken place during any other time period in Radio's life, the story would not have had the same effect. Because the story is set in North Carolina in the 60's, Radio was discriminated against because he is retarded.

In this movie, the acting was spectacular, the music fit nicely and the setting was perfect. . The cameramen did a great job setting the mood for the movie. The lighting was well done, it caused the movie to be dramatic. The producers directors, and all of the people behind the scenes worked hard to make this move a good one, they succeeded. Radio is a movie that will not soon be forgotten by many. It is a true story and Radio is still alive today and he leads his teammates into the field at every game. At age 53 he is still an 11th grader at Hanna High School in Anderson North Carolina. Coach Honeycut was inducted into the High School coaches hall of fame.



Thanks soooo much in advance...Love Always -Stina-

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Date: 12/7/2004 8:51:00 PM  From Authorid: 32659    Do your own homework.  
Date: 12/7/2004 8:54:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 16916    I have done it..I am looking for advice..sheesh!  
Date: 12/7/2004 9:04:00 PM  ( Admin-FA )   It looks good to me, Stina. ScrabbleKid, that's not really too nice....
Date: 12/7/2004 9:07:00 PM  From Authorid: 3125    I think you did a real good job on it. ((Hugs))  
Date: 12/7/2004 9:09:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 16916    Thanks Chatmin FA (Fallin Angel I think?) And Rusure   
Date: 12/7/2004 9:31:00 PM  From Authorid: 12341    Looks good to me. My youngest daughter is in her first year of college and often asks me to read over her papers. She works and has little ones to take care of and spends every spare moment on her homework. I understand exactly where you are coming from. This is well written, in my opinion.  
Date: 12/7/2004 9:33:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 16916    Thanks Brenda..you're right. I go to schoo fulltime and I work between part and full time. Its all I can do to spit out a paper at midnight the day before my paper is do! Thanks for your help!  
Date: 12/7/2004 9:34:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 16916    lol see I am tired! school* DUE!* LOL  
Date: 12/7/2004 10:19:00 PM  From Authorid: 20750    That is awesome to me! Scrabble Kid show some manners! Geeze!  
Date: 12/7/2004 11:31:00 PM  From Authorid: 62915    2nd line. I think you may need a comma after cuba gooding jr.
"The football coach, played by Ed Harris the supporting actor, invites Radio to join his family at the climax of the film when Radio's mother died." - do you need to have the words "the supporting actor" here? To me this line doesn't flow very well.

The main character played by Cuba Gooding Jr. was mentally challenged. You have already stated this.. do you need to have it? if so maybe you could reword it a little?

In what you have written you essentially have all the info you need. However it could flow better \if you joined some of your sentences together. To me it seems to be very choppy as you only have short sentences.

I may be too late to help but PM me and i will help you some more if you want me to Ghost-chcik

  
Date: 12/7/2004 11:34:00 PM  From Authorid: 62915    And i think there is nothing wrong with askign for assistance. You have obvioulsy written it and everyone needs help proofreading and making sure that other people know what you are trying to say I love to help people with homework so dont be afraid to ask for help. Ghost-chick  

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