Date: 10/19/2004 7:00:00 PM
From Authorid: 37101
I sense some resentment. But that last stanza owns my soul. Seriously. Awesome job. -  |
Date: 10/19/2004 7:04:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 53836
thank you! I have to use my voice the only way I know how...I chose the poetry platform at USM...always have, always will, God willing  I just can't help but notice how pathetic this 'grand' country really is sometimes...it's all in the packaging...I could go on and on, but it would be a rant and no one else would comment, LOL But this world is strange compared to the one I grew up in...  |
Date: 10/20/2004 4:17:00 AM
From Authorid: 55386
Awesome! You hear about the good things about America, you hear the bad things, but never in a sense that it makes sense, and you can actually believe it. I was only in the US for 15 minutes once, and I was scared to death, mind you it was 12 AM in Buffalo. But that doesn't matter, I was freaked out lol. Awesome job!  |
Date: 10/20/2004 5:44:00 AM
From Authorid: 8024
wow, nothing can ever be perfect and your poetry shows the many negative places here in the usa ...we as a people must make the changes and we can if we truly unite for a cause ... Excellent writing space.. always have enjoyed reading your work ... c  |
Date: 10/20/2004 11:37:00 AM
From Authorid: 46320
On your soapbox yelling loud and clear Space. Great writing, and I hope you will always use the poetry section here. Be Good...  |
Date: 11/10/2004 4:22:00 PM
From Authorid: 48531
i wish we all had insight as you do space to these things that are a real problem in our world. So many times people feel that one little thing will not make a dent in the world, but a billion people with their one little thing and pretty soon, we are in a world of covered landfills, being buried close to waterways, spreading the pollution to many shores away. We all need to wake up to the filth that we are all crerating. Great post.  |
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Date: 11/10/2004 6:39:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 53836
A soap box post, LOL! |
