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Collaboration poem- Carrie and Eddo

  Author:  52155  Category:(Poetry) Created:(10/10/2004 9:29:00 PM)
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Carrie: I want us to make a new poem. Like we did about the bird

Eddo: ummm... There once was a man from Nantucket

Carrie: Ok... yeah, that sucks Ed. You've already used that line before.
Carrie: Try it again.

Eddo: There once was a girl from Kentucky

Carrie: No. Come on. try and be serious here
Carrie: How about "There once was a bug"
Carrie: and go from there.

Eddo: Ode to a bug.
Eddo: There once was a bug...

Carrie: Wait. Bug. Doesn't work.
Carrie: Lets try, "The little ...." something, help me out here.

Eddo: "oh good grief, you are killing me here"

Carrie: "And she sat in silence with fear"

Eddo: "Even though he doesn't drink...."

Carrie: "He still reaks of stink.."

Eddo: you were supposed to go for the beer line.
Eddo: "It took all his courage to ask"

Carrie: ..Beer line? Ed. What the heck are you .. Nevermind. Lets just continue.
Carrie: "If he could pass some gas.."

Eddo: "She was constantly bugging him"

Carrie: And... All he would do is sit on Christian
proboards and talk about God! Screw you Eddo, I'm
done. I can't work with someone like you!





Ode to a bug (finished version)
oh good grief. You are killing me here,
As she sat in silence with fear.
Even though he doesn't drink,
He still reaks of stink.
It took all his courage to ask,
If he could pass some gas.
She was constantly bugging him,
And... All he would do is sit on Christian proboards and talk about God! Screw you Eddo, I'm done. I can't work with someone like you!



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Replies:      
Date: 10/10/2004 9:36:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    the reviews are in- "I laughed, I cried, I have a bi-polar disorder" -Steve Bushemi  
Date: 10/10/2004 9:37:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    Oh. My. God. Steve Bushemi reviewed our poem!! This is the happiest day of my LIFE! I mean, it's Steve Bushemi!  
Date: 10/10/2004 9:39:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    I hope we get Poet of the month for this...  
Date: 10/10/2004 9:40:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    I'd be happy with Poet of the hour. We did work hard on this. Sorry for snapping at the end, Ed. I thought you were saying I sucked...Or something.  
Date: 10/10/2004 9:40:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    But still, the poem came out great!  
Date: 10/10/2004 9:40:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    I hate comment jumps!  
Date: 10/10/2004 9:43:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    no problem, Car. The best petry comes from the pain and anguish of the writer. At least that is what Peter Brady always said.  
Date: 10/10/2004 9:46:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    It's care, not car. I do not have wheels...  
Date: 10/10/2004 9:47:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    Oh.. Peter Brady. I thought you were over that obsession..  
Date: 10/10/2004 9:57:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    I'm gald you enjoyed it Doh. It came straight form the heart  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:00:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    more reviews just in- "EDDO, YOU'RE A TWIT!!!!"- anonymous  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:01:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    Reveiw; "What did I miss? I was on the crapper."  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:03:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    another review: "I loved it! But then I am a sponge that lives in a pineapple under the sea, so what the heck do I know?" -S. Squarepants  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:05:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    "Better than voting for Bush!"- MissC  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:05:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    I saw George Clooney walk in and take a look. But, I guess he thinks he is too good to leave a comment. *rolls eyes*  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:05:00 PM  From Authorid: 59876    "it sucked you loon!" s. tentacles  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:06:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    oh, Clooney thinks he is too big for us now. I get it, Mr. Big shot... :/  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:08:00 PM  From Authorid: 59876    "yummmm....poetry tastes good." p. star  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:09:00 PM  From Authorid: 59876    i saw the name eddo on another post, and it was good.  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:09:00 PM  From Authorid: 59876    then he forked over a rib and carrie...well, you know how it goes  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:10:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    "Ehhhehehehehe, hey Lois, she said "gas"." Peter Griffin.  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:27:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    "I give it one thumb up. I can't tell you what I put that one thumb up, but I liked the poem" Roger Ebert.  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:28:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    "I liked it. No, I didn't. Yes I did, but I didn't vote for it. Ok, I voted for it, but I didn't agree with it when I did."- J. Kerry  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:30:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    "Number 5 is alive!" - number 5  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:31:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    "Yes or no. Yes. Or, no. Did you vote for this post?"  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:35:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    "Garg......"- R. Dangerfield  
Date: 10/10/2004 10:36:00 PM  From Authorid: 24319    lol, you are SO insensitive sometimes.  
Date: 10/10/2004 11:34:00 PM  From Authorid: 28193    And I thought I was bored!  
Date: 10/10/2004 11:38:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    LOL @ GT!  
Date: 10/10/2004 11:47:00 PM  From Authorid: 28193    LOL  
Date: 10/11/2004 6:54:00 AM  From Authorid: 62876    I LOVE Steve Bushemi! If he likes it, then I like it, too!...HipChik  
Date: 4/14/2005 1:22:00 AM  From Authorid: 28946    OMG! ROTFL.  
Date: 11/7/2005 7:55:00 PM  From Authorid: 16376    LMAO. it took me awhile to get that bi polar disorder joke though. I'm slow.  
Date: 11/14/2005 6:57:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    lol   
Date: 11/10/2006 4:57:00 PM  From Authorid: 7574    Beautiful. Classic. Moving. Powerful.  
Date: 11/10/2006 6:03:00 PM  From Authorid: 59876    a classic, pure genious at it's finest.  
Date: 11/10/2006 6:13:00 PM  From Authorid: 59876    good poetry never dies, it just gets randomed on usm  
Date: 11/10/2006 6:15:00 PM  From Authorid: 59876    quit trying to pretend you wern't showing your wheels around the tri sites car. we all saw, and the smart ones saved copies in word to spread around at a later date  
Date: 11/10/2006 6:17:00 PM  From Authorid: 59876    the sentiments in the final stanza touched me deeply. it is the words i have been longing to express throughout my life without capability. my life will never be the same. *sobs*  
Date: 11/10/2006 6:18:00 PM  From Authorid: 59876    my sister writes poetry like this but it's better, has more depth, and has been published within 94,562 different media outlets. ya'll are amatures.  
Date: 11/10/2006 11:00:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    and I am still waiting to get poet of the month...  
Date: 11/10/2006 11:00:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    Amatures? WHAT???? oh yeah, we are. so :P  
Date: 11/11/2006 9:41:00 AM  From Authorid: 59876    so where is the sequel? you are not giving proper tribute to the almighty dollar. children are screaming around the world...*chants* sequel sequel SEQUEL....*announcer's voice* the crowd goes wild! only 13 seconds left before the dropping of the ball to bring in the new year...10, 9 8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1....HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!! oh wait....wrong event lol  
Date: 11/11/2006 9:42:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    LOL!  
Date: 11/20/2006 6:02:00 AM  From Authorid: 59876    you'll always be my poet of the month eddo *bats eyes*  
Date: 11/20/2006 6:24:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 52155    awwww shucks! Thanks doh!   

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