Date: 8/23/2004 7:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 23101
Kronk this poem was quite beautiful. It really describes the "Falling" part, of your mind, like you arent falling physically, but in your mind its all unravelling. I think that that is awesome, and creates wonderful reading material! Thanks so much for posting Kronk! *huge hugs*  |
Date: 8/23/2004 8:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
the turbulant spiral, know it well buddy. good poem here
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Date: 8/23/2004 9:41:00 PM
From Authorid: 50499
And with so few words you say so much. Good one, Kronk.  |
Date: 8/24/2004 1:03:00 AM
From Authorid: 59418
Don't worry daddy, i'll catch ya!  Excellent poem  |
Date: 8/24/2004 5:35:00 AM
From Authorid: 46320
Hold on for all your worth Kronk. There are times that nothing in this big world makes sense, and the only thing we can do is depend on those that love us. Great writing. Be Good...  |
Date: 8/24/2004 9:44:00 AM
From Authorid: 4548
WWWOWWW!!! you NAILED that one! a gold medal, for sure. it just stuck! brooding, concise, spare. you might as well have opened up my heart on that.  |
Date: 8/24/2004 10:03:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21435
Hi, Little Jung  Exactly the feelings that I was trying to express, my friend. Thank you so much for checking out the words. Stay sweet  |
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Date: 8/24/2004 10:06:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21435
Hey there, Timbo Hack It's a long way down and I'm kicking and trashing all the way..Thanks for reading, man.. |
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Date: 8/24/2004 10:07:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21435
Hello, Dragonflyer Those few words were about all I could muster at the time. Thanks, lady.. |
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Date: 8/24/2004 10:09:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21435
Hiya, Metal Princess. You're so sweet, my daughter. Thanks for your kind thoughts... |
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Date: 8/24/2004 10:12:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21435
Hello, American Girl.. Evvie..Your words are magic, my friend. Thank you for those. Stay sweet |
Date: 8/24/2004 10:18:00 AM
From Authorid: 23101
*Blinks* You mean I got it right? :P Hehe.. Thanks for posting.  *huge hugs* |
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Date: 8/24/2004 10:25:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21435
Lady Jezebel Our souls are as mirrors that reflect both the light and the darkness within. I see with your eyes and my heart is opened with your own. Now let's cut all this "fatale" stuff and be happy You know I love you.. Thanks for reading.. |
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Date: 8/24/2004 10:28:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21435
Sweet Little Jung You are wise beyond your years my friend..Lordy!....and what an education you're getting by hanging around us wild and crazy ones...*wink* |
Date: 8/24/2004 2:16:00 PM
From Authorid: 27534
When the Falcon and the Tercel fall it is due to passions....loss of senses...so entwined in the focus of it that to fall in this way is to fall in love or lust so deeply....the ground is not perceived and they many times fall to their destruction....due to the senses of focused on each other.... great analogy...very creative....short and packs a punch....I am sure the intended is honored.  |
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Date: 8/24/2004 3:20:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21435
Thank you, Wise Love the way you put it, my friend. My falcon is so special to me. |
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Date: 8/24/2004 4:06:00 PM
From Authorid: 27534
Yes birds....falcons, very special.... |
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Date: 8/24/2004 4:10:00 PM
From Authorid: 27534
I've been known to be a bird watcher myself.... |
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Date: 8/24/2004 8:42:00 PM
From Authorid: 4548
we are deep rollers, you and i |
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Date: 8/26/2004 9:43:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21435
I love soaring with you |
