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Date: 8/12/2004 5:49:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62835
This poem is better in its original form. It depends a lot on the spacing, which did not com through in this post. I don't know how to fix it on here, so, if it is not as good as my usual stuff, my apologies. I didn't realize it would do that. |
Date: 8/12/2004 9:03:00 AM
From Authorid: 23796
Yeah, the spacing is hard to do on USM...but wow, it is Really good. This can be taken so many ways! The first few lines really bring you in! Great Writing, keep up the good work!  |
Date: 8/12/2004 3:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 27534
Yep....and I really like the last line.....a fine read.  |
Date: 6/18/2005 6:06:00 AM
From Authorid: 51292
Nice poetry!! Thanks for sharing your work, well done!! 80)  |
