Date: 7/14/2004 8:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 36994
In my opinion, I would say this does qualify as a poem Hehe, great writing, and I'm glad that you were persuaded to post this, thank that person for me. Keep on a'writing, and post up your work!  |
Date: 7/14/2004 8:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 49763
Aww that's sad but thank you for sharing. Since I don't know the first thing about poetry I can't say if it is a poem or not. It does sound good to me eventhough it a sad one. ~~  |
Date: 7/14/2004 9:04:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 13636
You just did. lol I never counted my writing as poetry really, because it never rhymes or follows the normal parameters that the English teachers taught all of us...but I dont think its too terrible all that aside. lol And thanks for the comments.   |
Date: 7/14/2004 9:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 62779
poetry doesn't have to rhyme or even make complete sense...it's the words that are written and the passion that is found within them that make any writing, poetry... at least thats my opinion.... I love it, thank you for sharing ~Angel Wolfe~  |
Date: 7/15/2004 6:47:00 AM
From Authorid: 27534
A great expression .......I liked the expression of basically seeing oneself in the eyes of others and then looking for yourself in your own eyes.  |
Date: 7/15/2004 8:08:00 AM
From Authorid: 62249
Oh it's a poem. If stringing a bunch of works together to make a picture is a poem than this is defly a poem. - MC Bacon  |
Date: 6/16/2005 7:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 18111
Howdy Mngr. I thought it would only be polite to check out your writing. Since I already had a taste of your humor I chose my forte' poetry. That's forte' only in my opinion. I'm glad someone convinced you to post this. Prose is a literary medium distinguished from poetry in its plain speak; however, prose is no less an art form in the humble view of this amateur-internet-author. The conscious use of creative imagination constitutes art. The expression of sentiment in a written form that arouses thought, reflection, appreciation in the reader constitutes great art in my book. May your grey eyes "Manage" a smile today.  |
