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Creatures Below

  Author:  43015  Category:(Poetry) Created:(6/14/2004 8:39:00 PM)
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I once knew a girl
Who had no friends
But then one day
Her life finally ends

She was on a camping trip
With all her family
And that is when the Creatures below
Dragged her under sea

She was walking on the shore
Until suddenly
A Creature grabbed her leg
And pulled her in the sea

She struggled and scream
"Somebody please help me!"
But the Creature kept pulling her out
Farther into the sea

She kicked and struggled
Trying to get free
But the Creature kept his grip
Then pulled her under the sea

She held her breath
For what seem like a year
The Creature just smiled at her
Knowing that she's in fear

She was almost out of air
When it finally stopped
"Do not be afraid my dear
For I can talk"

The girl eyes widen
And tried not to scream
Hoping she would wake up
Letting it all be a dream

"This is not a dream" he said
"I can read your thoughts
Just follow me" he said
But instead she fought

"No!" She yelled
"I will not go with you"
"aww but you will" he said
She realized that was true

He dragged her into a cave
And that is all I know
Nobody heard from her again
Or from the Creature below

by Scooby_Doo_Gurl

this is a very weird poem that I wrote and it's not the greatest LoL

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Date: 6/14/2004 8:44:00 PM  From Authorid: 34912    I can totally relate. I had this happen to a friend once...lol. This was wierd, but definately entertaining. I'm glad you didn't hesitate to post it.  
Date: 6/14/2004 8:50:00 PM  From Authorid: 62575    Great stuff looks like you had trouble ending it. Quite an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 6/15/2004 4:30:00 AM  From Authorid: 53558    This poem reads like a story. I like it a lot. Thank you for sharing...hugs...  
Date: 6/15/2004 8:28:00 AM  From Authorid: 27534    Hmmmmmmmmm a Merman? Did they live happily everafter? It speaks a story....I gotta know....  

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