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Date: 6/13/2004 4:21:00 PM
From Authorid: 62506
Dude!!That would definantly impede ur breathing!.. but the swingin thingy might be fun!Cool poem.  |
Date: 6/13/2004 9:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 34912
don't do it slowly... it'll hurt!  |
Date: 6/22/2004 1:09:00 PM
From Authorid: 23796
I couldn't help but Giggle when I read this, Not meaning it as an insult. The beginning of the poem started out so Beautiful & Pieceful and Ended abruptly with negativity. Personally, I feel I can relate to that...things going so Peacefully around you while you live your life in chaos. Again, Good Imagery.  |
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Date: 6/22/2004 1:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 23796
Pieceful=Peaceful |
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35051 Category:(Poetry) Created:(6/13/2004 2:37:00 PM)