Date: 6/5/2004 5:35:00 PM
From Authorid: 14780
Could I suggest "Lost Identity" for a title...this is truly a amazing emotional poem.  |
Date: 6/5/2004 5:51:00 PM
From Authorid: 34912
nah... "Untitled" is a great heading for this. I like this poem a lot, especially paragraph seven. There's a tone here that is low and melancholy and but then again, tongue and cheek. I love this, Arion. Thanks for sharing it.  |
Date: 6/5/2004 11:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Hey buddy  With words like that, the lady's will be fawning all over you.. Excellant poetry, Arion1. Write on...  |
Date: 6/7/2004 1:19:00 AM
From Authorid: 62752
haha very nice, u did a great job im a lady good job ~*KristenKay*~ :-)  |
Date: 6/7/2004 1:41:00 PM
From Authorid: 49910
Arion, you can get a date. You are a great guy. This poem was sad then at the end..well it was a SUPRISE. I hope everything works out for you. I love you!-ERHIT  |
52489 Category:(Poetry) Created:(6/5/2004 5:28:00 PM)