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The Haunted Doll- Part 1 (I swear that I will NOT cancel this story, and that this part will be bett

  Author:  61920  Category:(Horror) Created:(3/4/2004 6:49:00 PM)
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Author's Note- I swear that I WILL NOT CANCEL THIS STORY! I've brushed up on my writing, and I have a 332 page reference book right next to me. No joke. :) There is no way that anyone will not enjoy this story now...

The TV was turned on.

"Breaking news!!! 15-year old high school student Pam Adders has just committed suicide! She was found dead, due to consumption of poison, in her room just minutes ago! Neighbors and family cannot explain this saddening event. Pam was always known to be a friendly, amiable type of girl, and no one would have suspected her of doing a thing like this. More details will follow..."

"Hunh! That girl always got on my nerves," said Jenna Zorri.

Jenna was fixing herself a sandwich in her small, little kitchen. She was a student at the same school that Pam went to, Michigan State High School.

Jenna was a cruel and haughty person. She didn't care much for Pam, anyway, since Jenna practically picked on her every other day. And no one could do a thing about it- Jenna's dad was the principal of that school.

"It serves her right. That ugly, little girl. Good thing she died!" laughed Jenna. She hated Pam because of her smarts, and would do anything to lower her self-esteem.

Jenna would call her names, push her, throw things at her, make fun of her right in front of her, and Pam wouldn't do a thing. She was too nice of a girl to fight with anyone- she was the peaceful type. And because of that, Pam was liked by everyone in the school due to her nice personality, except Jenna. No... Jenna had to pick on her because in her mind, Pam was better than her, but she wouldn't admit it. No, Jenna was the type of person who would admit to those kinds of things, and who always enjoyed torturing others better than her, knowing that she can't be stopped.

And now, since Pam was dead, Jenna could be happy, getting rid of a girl that was smarter than her. Jenna didn't care- she was the most selfish and cruel person in the school.

Actually, Pam's death was due to Jenna's torturing remarks. Her comments decreased Pam's self-esteem to the point where she couldn't live with herself anymore, and she committed suicide. Jenna knew that the cause of Pam's death was because of her, but she could care less.

Now I'll be the most popular girl in school, thought Jenna, and I'll be liked by every boy. This is too good to be true.

She smiled. She rid herself of Pam, and could concentrate on other things now. Now, life would be peaceful for Jenna.

Or so she thought...

How it changed my life:

Didn't... please let me know if you like it so far...

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Date: 3/5/2004 2:49:00 AM  From Authorid: 62065    I love it, keep it coming....I especially like it that its in Michigan...which is where I live! Can't wait to read more!!!  
Date: 3/5/2004 4:09:00 AM  From Authorid: 53909    Sounds good so far. Can't wait to read the next part!  
Date: 3/5/2004 6:55:00 AM  From Authorid: 49025    I like it! Can't wait for the next part.  
Date: 3/5/2004 11:08:00 AM  From Authorid: 11097    Wow....Jenna is so mean! Good character discription and setting, I can't wait to read the following parts very interesting, keep going!  
Date: 3/5/2004 8:07:00 PM  From Authorid: 3270    And its sad that it actually happens. :/

Keep em' comin!
  
Date: 3/6/2004 10:22:00 PM  From Authorid: 53155    awesome!!! i love it great writing going to read part 2 now :-)  
Date: 4/8/2004 6:41:00 AM  From Authorid: 62650    Wow, Great opening. It gets the reader's attention automatically and everyone can almost relate to Jenna's character, because I had someone like that pick on me everyday.
God bless,
Jennifer-7
Date: 4/10/2004 9:51:00 PM  From Authorid: 20581    great start on to part 2  
Date: 4/13/2004 2:42:00 PM  From Authorid: 62631    LOVE IT!!! GREAT!!

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