Date: 3/3/2004 12:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 40319
*round of applause* very good  |
Date: 3/3/2004 12:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 62506
Much anticipation is stirred up in each line...it wrings out emotion word by word.It has a unique style all its own and the last lines reek with passion.Well done Heather...again you have proven yourself to be an exceptional poet.l/y,woodshed  |
Date: 3/3/2004 12:57:00 PM
From Authorid: 53155
very nice great work  |
Date: 3/3/2004 1:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 19685
that's beautiful! i love this writing style, i use it myself sometimes. definately keep writing!  |
Date: 3/3/2004 1:44:00 PM
From Authorid: 62222
You know, I don't know if you like video games at all GA, but this reminded me of Fatal Frame: Crimson Butterfly where the one sister whispers to the other that she's been waiting for her to come back to that haunted village and kill her. Pretty Intense, I liked it. Thanks for reminding me of a game I love!  |
Date: 3/3/2004 6:24:00 PM
From Authorid: 55009
great poem... yet another check on your wall of greatness... you might have to turn your wall into a mansion as well as you write and how great they turn out.  |
Date: 3/21/2004 6:40:00 PM
From Authorid: 62599
Whoah, your words are like a smack across the face in the best possible way  |
55386 Category:(Poetry) Created:(3/3/2004 12:01:00 PM)