To my crush....

Now this poem isn't finshed yet but I just wanted to know how others thought I was coming along.

From the first time I saw you, till the way I look at you now,
you're still incredibly beautiful with nothing to say but wow.
You're like dream come true, like an angel on earth,
I've always had a crush on you now ever since birth.

Not a day goes by without thoughts of you running through my head,
and I can't leave out the dreams of you when I lay in my bed.
I don't think a dictionary could ever define,
the way I feel when you're eyes meet mine.

I wish I could tell you in person just how I feel,
how I would be your everything with your heart I hope to steal.
I'd give the world and universe too,
for even if its only a moment I could just be with you.

Yes there are other girls as pretty as a white winter snow,
but I think why pick a flower when I can have a rose.
You're smile can always bring out a wonderful light,
I bet it could even bring out the sun in the middle of the night.

All day long there are people around who talk with violence,
but when you come near everything pretty much goes silent.
you have to see it to believe because its so unreal,
when you come around everything goes to a standing still.

Your like a piece of heaven God gave to this world,
so don't ever think your just some ordinary girl.
Even if I'm having a really bad day,
just to see you in the hall makes everything go away.