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Unchangeable ++Nimiwae++

  Author:  58334  Category:(Poetry) Created:(1/31/2004 6:58:00 AM)
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This is going to be a song I think. I'm not done with it but I hope you like it :-)

Closing walls and tickings clocks
Break across time itself

Churning waters turn to sand
Seldom changes in this land

Darkness shatters the lighted glass
Mere reflections of the past

Time dances on the stars
Whispering on the air afar

Floating feathers fall away
Ropes of life begin to fray

Keys will break and light will fade
It makes no difference to those unchanged

Mirrors will shatter and time will stop
It makes a difference in the world of luck

Time ticks away in the shape of sand
I'll be waiting with an outstretched hand

Slipping away into the imaged rain
The rickety bridge no longer holds my pain

Rushing waters drifting past
Carry away all things that last

Changing colors and smokey winds
Bribe my soul to the world within

Raising castles bright my eyes
Clashing the gate that holds all lies

And in this life are things unchanged
Pull me away to those unchained

To the bright nights filled with stars
The oceans deep free of scars

Bring me to realize
The world is all one big surprise

And beneath all the dirt
You will find it all unearthed

Stepping down from the throne
You sing a song that throws a stone

Rippled water never looked so good
So said those from a bridge they stood

Gallantly taking all thier hope
And casting it once more to the fraying rope

Flowers bloom and spring will fade
Take me away to those unchanged

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Date: 1/31/2004 8:25:00 AM  From Authorid: 21435    "Time dances on the stars" is my favorite line of yours, Nimiwae. Of course the whole poem covered much ground and took my mind on a wonderful journey. Thanks for the words and Write on....  
Date: 1/31/2004 9:42:00 AM  From Authorid: 51292    Wow very nice Nimiwae!! Your a very talented writer, this is written nicely..i like your choice of words here. Thanks for sharing and keep writing :0)  
Date: 2/4/2004 1:52:00 PM  From Authorid: 11097    Wow, this is outstanding! Great job so far, you are talented! ...  
Date: 2/6/2004 5:36:00 PM  From Authorid: 62506    Nimiwae, The texture in your work is enchanted and gently lifts away the reader into the very heart of your poem. Dreamlike and taunting it plays with the imagination. A fine showing of your talent. I am anxious to read more of your beautiful work. Dom aka woodshed  
Date: 3/8/2004 6:07:00 PM  From Authorid: 56176    i book marked this i love poems ,9. reply huggs from esp chick this is so great,  

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