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Date: 1/30/2004 12:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 48527
oooh, nice but shows signs of violence, write on  |
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Date: 1/30/2004 12:54:00 PM
From Authorid: 56913
I'm with canter...I liked this part "Among the dead, I find you lying glassy-eyed and broken. You my darling, you my maimed dream…. I am all grown now and you have to remain, dead on this fractured field of what will never be." intense  thanx for sharin God Bless xoxoxox Shazy AKA  |
Date: 1/30/2004 1:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Rose tint glasses and the blood turns black. A withered hand reaching for those times that were. Loved the poetry, Regretfulhalo. Write on....  |
Date: 1/30/2004 1:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 27534
Poetic and picturesque....well done.  |
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Date: 1/30/2004 3:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 19613
"I am careful where I step, I do not want to disturb the slumbering, never-waking corpses of our dreams." loved those lines. reminds me of a smashing pumpkins lyric (best band ever)  |
Date: 2/6/2004 12:44:00 PM
From Authorid: 56359
I got tingles reading this. I trully admire your writting, and your writting is an inspiration to me. Thank you for sharing your work.  |
Date: 2/6/2004 10:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 45684
INTENSE. Again, I find myself sucked into your poetry. I can picture it, and it sends shivers all the way down to my toes.  |
Date: 3/1/2004 8:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 51070
Very good. Keep writing.  |
Date: 3/3/2004 1:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 40319
*round of applause*  |
Date: 4/17/2004 9:43:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Wistful... Keep writing, great poet..  |
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62222 Category:(Poetry) Created:(1/30/2004 10:05:00 AM)