Date: 1/29/2004 10:56:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 3688
I take suggestions too  If you know anything   |
Date: 1/29/2004 10:56:00 AM
From Authorid: 56913
I'm sorry Dreamer Poet...I don't exactly know any websites..But I wish you luck .. sorry  xoxoxox Shazy AKA  |
Date: 1/29/2004 10:57:00 AM
From Authorid: 50499
Sorry, can't help you out there but you can use a thesaurus(sp) couldn't hurt...DragonFlyer  |
Date: 1/29/2004 10:58:00 AM
From Authorid: 45397
The beauty of her beautiful ocean blue eyes stared at me with hipnotic insistance. hehe that help?  |
Date: 1/29/2004 10:58:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
Well, you could disguise it using other sentances. Instead of saying: He/she walked over to the dresser to brush his/her hair you could say "She got up and walked towards the dresser to brush her chestnut colored hair". It all in how you incorporate the details of the person into what they are already doing or using the perspective of another. I don't know of any websites right off hand but I'll see what I can come up with....  |
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Date: 1/29/2004 11:02:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 3688
I'm looking for along the lines of "almond shaped eyes" "pouty lips" "upturned nose" etc....Basically what a person would see if they look into a mirror. |
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Date: 1/29/2004 11:08:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
You can still use that same technique. Hmm for example: "John stole a glance of Lisa from the corner of his eye, her almond shaped eyes were wide with wonder and her puty lips were slack with suprise. As she gazed at the dimly illuminated being in front of her, her expression of total awe washed all the snobbiness from her face and made even her snooty, upturned nose more bearable." Or something like that.... |
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Date: 1/29/2004 11:09:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
errrr..."pouty lips" (hehehe puty lips, what the heck are those???) |
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Date: 1/29/2004 11:09:00 AM
From Authorid: 45397
lol she can still stare hipnotically in the mirror |
Date: 1/29/2004 11:11:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 3688
hehe yeah i'm just looking for more examples like what i gave...:P I don't think every character i write about can have almond shaped eyes and pouty lips  |
Date: 1/29/2004 11:39:00 AM
From Authorid: 26733
Beauty stares itself in the mirror and looks in wonder at the her moon lit eyes, her soft silk lips, devilishly long coal black hair…an untamed personality to match her untamed walk. This is beauty, this is her. Matt aka  |
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Date: 1/29/2004 12:05:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 3688
*swoons* Matttttt you should be a writer with words like that dear heart lol |
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Date: 1/29/2004 12:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 26733
Eh, I try. Thank you very much Dreamer Babe Matt aka |
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Date: 1/29/2004 12:16:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 3688
well keep it up dear...you're very good |
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Date: 1/29/2004 12:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 26733
Thank you babe, now I just have to work on my spelling and grammar and I’m off to the…hmmm…are there any Writing Award Shows on tv? Thank god for spell checkers, I would be lost and so would half the people I talk to. Matt aka |
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Date: 1/29/2004 12:21:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 3688
Grammar is my weak spot but spelling I do ok in, and I'm not sure there probably are though |
Date: 1/29/2004 1:29:00 PM
From Authorid: 16671
The beauty in her almond eyes were dull in compassarison to her full lush lips, compounded by her thick blonde hair, it was safe to say this woman's looks was something many women strived for and never could obtain.  |
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Date: 1/29/2004 1:31:00 PM
From Authorid: 16671
I meant to say WAS not were. hehehehhe Hey don't ask me, I'm only the piano player, LOL ya right never played one in my life. |
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Date: 1/29/2004 1:32:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 3688
lol @ fb....if y'all come across anything let me know :P |
