My boyfriend and I broke up last night and there was a small discussion of getting back together when we've had time to ourselves, time to clear our heads and breathe and such. I wrote something that I want to turn into a song and I want honest opinions and any suggestions on improvements.
Blinded by tears Can't feel through the pain So much to say and I can't speak I'm still trying
And I won't give up Not until I've had enough So I'll sit and wait for you Not going to let go now Never say die
I can still feel your lips Still feel your arms around me I can still taste you when I lick my lips You're everything.
And I won't give up Not until I've had enough So I'll wait...I'll wait for you Not going to let go now Never say die...never...never...never say die
They say if you love something let it go If it comes back then that's how you know. So come back...cuz I'm still waiting...and Always will be...always will be
And I won't give up Not until I've had enough So I'm waiting...waiting for you Not letting go now Never say die...don't ever say die. You can join Unsolved Mysteries and post your own mysteries or
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keep writing though its very good. Much love, rekles 
