Date: 1/13/2004 9:21:00 PM
From Authorid: 7952
Interesting poem FE.. Different to other poetry i have read before on this site. I like the way you have entwined two concepts that are common in society today  I like it.. thanks for sharing  |
Date: 1/13/2004 9:32:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 59940
Thank you very much for the feed back. I was feeling lyrical and day dreaming, when I thought about the relationship between curves and lines. Somehow, I gave the curve and the line a personality each based solely on what they are seen as. They are seen as contradicting shapes by most people, but to me they are both required in order to make a pretty picture, or delicate drawing. Personal, indeed, and yet rather defiant.
I thank you again for bothering to even review my humble poem!! *hugs* ~Fayes Eyes  |
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Date: 1/13/2004 10:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 7952
FE, That is sometimes what poetry is about! Writing down random thoughts! I like poetry which has not been planned down to the bone. Flowing words just straight out of the mind is what allows the readers imagination create its own images and conclusions! And no, Thank YOU for posting on USM Poets on USM don't get enough recognition ! |
Date: 1/14/2004 11:33:00 AM
From Authorid: 27534
Great Geometric lesson in poetic Form..... cool.  |
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Date: 1/18/2004 12:43:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 59940
I feel honored to have yoru reviews, Wise and Dolphin ^-^ FE |
Date: 1/19/2004 3:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Hello, Fayes Eyes Love the words and the parallels. Thanks for the fine read. Write on...  |
