Date: 1/12/2004 10:36:00 PM
From Authorid: 53909
Wow, this is very good.   |
Date: 1/12/2004 11:37:00 PM
From Authorid: 56913
wow, amazing words Kalahn keep it up xoxox Shazy  |
Date: 1/13/2004 7:37:00 AM
From Authorid: 56840
There seems to be some underlying 'good riddance' underneath this.. Beautifully written, congrats on the Shout Out pick! You deserve it.. Keep writing..  |
Date: 1/13/2004 8:54:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
I really like this, Like LB, I think it seems to say 'good riddance' and 'thankfully, at last I can rest without trying to please you'. Good poem Kalahn.<RegretfulHalo>  |
Date: 1/13/2004 2:32:00 PM
From Authorid: 62453
good poem, great symbolism  |
Date: 1/26/2004 8:39:00 AM
From Authorid: 42568
the fly on the wall of your heart... awesome poem  |
