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"Trapped" pt 8 ~Lilliana~ based on the movie "The Hole" THE FINALE!

  Author:  54532  Category:(Fiction) Created:(1/5/2004 5:59:00 PM)
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"Why?" Missy asked. "You really want to know?" Dan said, making sure they did. "Yes I do. We both do" Keira said. "OK. John told me that he was in love with you Keira. He did love you at one time Missy but that was long ago. After he told me this I couldn't let him you understand. I made a plan with Jeff to blame you Missy. You weren't even there and you killed Jeff, an innocent. I KILLED JOHN. Now you know. Keira I love you. Sorry Missy but your going to have to die" Dan said with a smile. Dan came running towards them but Missy punched him in the face, though it only stopped him for a short while. "That's for John" she said triumphantly. "Missy let's go!" Keira said as she pulled her towards the door. When they climbed up the high ladder to where the door was they were so nervous and in a rush that they couldn't put the key in correctly. Keira turned around and Dan wasn't lying on the floor nor was he in sight. "Missy look" Keira said pointing to the absence of Dan. "Here I am!" Dan said as he was climbing up the ladder. The girls screamed. They were trapped and had no where to go. "Missy help me unhinge the ladder quick!" Keira said. Missy and Keira started shaking the hinges so the bolts would come out but it didn't work. Dan jumped up and started struggling with Missy. Keira jumped on his back and started pulling his hair but it didn't work either. He threw missy over the railing. "MISSY!!!" Keira screamed as her body landed with a deep crack as her neck broke. "NOOOO!!!" Keira yelled as she looked over the railing. She turned around to see Dan with a sympathetic look as deep as a puddle. "I hate you!!" Keira said as she charged at him fully speed. Pushing him over the railing as well. He landed with a thud but no crack. Keira quickly fumbled the key into the door but this time got it right. "So that's what happened Jamie. All of it. Jeffs dead, Johns dead, Missy's dead and Dan's dead. Oh god how could I ever let this happen!" Keira broke down again. Jamie came over and hugged her sister. "Thank you Ira we needed that story" She said. "Oh honey Dan's still alive" She told Keira. "What!! Kill him you have to kill him!! Jamie he's going to come after me you have to know that in your heart" Keira pleaded. "What do you want me to do about it. He's in a coma he's not going to wake up any time soon" Jamie said. "That won't stop him. He will wake and when he will kill me" Keira said in a definite tone. "I'll see what I can do" Jamie said. She wouldn't let anyone hurt her baby sister so she would do what she needed to. She walked to the critical condition wing of the hospital and right into Dan's room. He was lying on the bed, half dead and so innocent looking. She went over to the respirator and turned it off and then quickly went back to Keira's room. Her sister was expecting her there and all Jamie could say was "it's done".

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Date: 1/8/2004 9:20:00 PM  From Authorid: 56840    Wow. That's a climatic ending! Loved the read, please peep writing..  
Date: 1/13/2004 11:30:00 AM  From Authorid: 49025    I enjoyed reading your story. It was very good!   
Date: 1/15/2004 11:08:00 PM  From Authorid: 36901    Great story!  

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