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Date: 1/5/2004 1:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 1432
Very deep and can feel the pain.. great writing.. bah just ignore teachers opinions thats what *I* did anyway hehe..  |
Date: 1/5/2004 1:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 35720
I feel your pain.. and who cares what your teacher says not to mention your friend.. just keep working at it.. for the record, I thought it was an awesome poem.  |
Date: 1/5/2004 1:18:00 PM
From Authorid: 28946
Poetry is a personal thing in my opinion and not everyone is going to like the same type of poem. Just because this teacher didn't give you the grade you thought you should have got doesn't mean it wasn't a good poem. If your poem made you feel better after writing it, that would mean more than a teachers quote in my opinion. Best wishes.  |
Date: 1/5/2004 1:19:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 29262
Awww thanks guys   |
Date: 1/5/2004 1:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 62478
some teachers already have idea of what poems are saposed be like. anything new or outside there "box" scare them keep up the great work.....deathletgo  |
Date: 1/5/2004 2:02:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Hiya Julie I would never say something like "Nice try" to one of my students. A teacher should know better. Anyway, I thought your poem was just fine. Can't get much past that bunch of readers^^^^^^If they say it's good then, it's good Thanks for the words and Write on...  |
Date: 1/5/2004 3:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 8905
That poem rocks hun. Dont feel to bad, when my teachers read my poetry, I was sent to the counslers office, and then to therapy. Some fun... Not! Dont Listen to what the teachers say, they dont matter. As long as you are happy with your work, nothing anyone else says matters. And tell your friend to stuff it, cause Jealousy also comes in the form of gloating.  |
Date: 6/6/2005 3:25:00 PM
From Authorid: 51292
Aww i agree with everyone else!! I think the poem is good, it expresses the way you were feeling. You did great, thanks for sharing your work!! 80)  |
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