Date: 1/5/2004 12:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 29262
You are lieing about this being your first poem arent you? I mean really! This poem is excellent. WAY WAY WAY better than mine. Keep writing. You could go far~  |
Date: 1/5/2004 12:55:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62478
Well I wrote a few for school, but never put any feeling behind it I'm glad you liked it...and can't say I have read yours...but I'm sure there great ....deathletgo  |
Date: 1/5/2004 12:59:00 PM
From Authorid: 44348
very nice and good for a first poem way better then my first poem keep it up and you will get better  |
Date: 1/5/2004 1:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 28946
Poetry is a good way to release the pressure in our hearts. take care.  |
Date: 1/5/2004 1:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Deathletgo Cool words, man. The lines about the stepping stones being past lives. That was an awesome idea. Mighty fine for a first one. Write on...  |
Date: 1/5/2004 1:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 62344
wow! excellent! Great story of life put a wonderfull visual in my mind thanks  |
Date: 1/5/2004 2:15:00 PM
From Authorid: 1432
**clap clap** GREAT job I liked it ..  |
Date: 1/5/2004 3:35:00 PM
From Authorid: 13546
This is amazing.. you can really feel the spark behind it.. the determination.. your own path.. Thank you for sharing this with us! You better keep writing!!  |
Date: 1/5/2004 3:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 51292
Great poem i really enjoyed reading this one!! keep writing 8D  |
Date: 1/6/2004 6:50:00 AM
From Authorid: 56913
great work keep it up can't believe it's the first time tho =O xoxox Shazy  |
Date: 1/6/2004 7:11:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62478
Thank you everone for your nice comments if I write anymore you guys will be the first I will share it with no it really my first poem that I wrote for myself, and not as an assignment. The only so far that I have put any real emotion into .....deathletgo  |
Date: 1/8/2004 8:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Oooh.. Nice words! I enjoyed the read.. Keep writing..  |