Something I wrote.............Sabriel

This is something that i wrote and i wanted some of yalls opinion on it...

The cool breeze in your face, a breath of fresh air and a view of the sky so magnificent that you know that there has to be a God because nothing else could make something so beautiful. You ignore the passing cars and their horns, the people yelling, the buzz of household appliances and listen only to what your heart hears. The swish of the trees, the many voices of the birds above, and the cicadas everlasting song in the grasses…you sit and you listen, forgetting your problems, your hopes, your dreams, because for one moment you are not yourself, you are no one person, you are apart of something bigger than you could ever imagine. Snapping out of this beautiful state of mind is done with great reluctance and ease...it is hard yet easy to do. Who wouldn’t want to bask in something so simple and pure? But the ever present clamor of mankind that you so heartily ignored reminds you that there are things to be done. People have to make a living, jobs must be seen to, and life as we normally see it, goes on.

So what do you think? Its an intro. to this book that im trying to write...well, let me know what you think, ok :D

-Sabe

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