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Date: 12/20/2003 1:49:00 AM
From Authorid: 42945
hi Egan!!!!, I dont think this is rubbish hun...I sense a struggle of a sort in this, great words my young friend....hugs  |
Date: 12/20/2003 6:37:00 AM
From Authorid: 28946
It's a good poem Egan and has a good flow. I think you are writing about being burnt from love but so hopelessly trapped and still in love. That's the way it is though.  |
Date: 12/20/2003 6:46:00 AM
From Authorid: 33286
heh, "choose not I who falls for smiles." now there is a good piece of advice from both of us bro'.   |
Date: 12/20/2003 7:29:00 AM
From Authorid: 19220
Sounds great to me. I love the choice of words. Thanks for sharing.  |
Date: 12/20/2003 7:45:00 AM
From Authorid: 11341
Rubbish? This poem is beautiful! Sad but beautiful  |
Date: 12/20/2003 7:53:00 AM
From Authorid: 46486
That's a good poem! I like it and your pumpkins  |
Date: 12/20/2003 12:29:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi Zema, my Aussie Cobber...heh, I don't really consider it rubbish, just being flippant...one of those moods again...hehehe. Yes, struggle, good sense you have. Peace,  |
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Date: 12/20/2003 12:30:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi Penny my friend, sorry I'm somewhat of a stranger these days...thank you for your words and accurate description of what you see in these words above. Peace, |
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Date: 12/20/2003 12:31:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hey Timbro, hope things are going good for you my brother...indeed...good piece of advice for us, and for many. Cheers man. Peace, |
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Date: 12/20/2003 12:31:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi IceQueen, thank you for those kind words, and hope you have a great Festive Season as well. Peace, |
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Date: 12/20/2003 12:32:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi DMK, yeah...bit sad...tend to write that way alot, releases a little sadness and thus makes room for any eventual happiness. Thank you for taking the time to read and reply...much appreciated. Peace, |
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Date: 12/20/2003 12:34:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi FA, my Chief Pumpkin Stalker Thanks for your kind words...for the poem, and for my pumpkins...I'm sure the pumpkins appreciate the admiration *snickers* Peace, |
Date: 12/21/2003 11:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Hello, Agent Smith. Reminds me of the "QuatrainsofNostradamus." hehe..Hidden meanings, but meaning all the same. I enjoyed your words, my friend. Write on....  |
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Date: 12/22/2003 11:25:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi Kronk, meanings within meanings...so completely entwined I've forgotten which way is out...hehehe. Cheers for stopping by my friend...always appreciated. Peace, |
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