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Date: 12/13/2003 6:02:00 PM
From Authorid: 53541
more beutiful work...keep writting! ~*~UD~*~  |
Date: 12/13/2003 10:50:00 PM
From Authorid: 23101
KaLahn, I'm not quite sure I understand what this poem is saying. It starts out so merry and bright, and goes into such hatred, and meaness. I guess that is probably what you feel. Other then the mixed message I am getting, it flows nicely.. Great work, although kind of sad.. It kind of tells me that you put your heart to someone elses and they turned on you, and that is never good. I hope you have a nice holiday.  Keep on writing..  |
Date: 12/14/2003 10:33:00 AM
From Authorid: 56913
Amazing poetry, keep it up love =) big hugs and kisserz!!! xoxox Shazy  |
Date: 12/17/2003 5:55:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Solace in the numbing cold..Thanks for the words, Ki_Lahn..Write on...  |
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