Date: 12/13/2003 11:36:00 AM
From Authorid: 59418
gud stuff hunni!!! Keep smiling Write on! |
Date: 12/13/2003 11:54:00 AM
From Authorid: 13283
This poem is a good example of a teen's growing pains . I am glad you are able to express your grief in poems . All gals need an outlet . Rhyme on ! Razzy aka |
Date: 12/13/2003 3:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 23963
Good poem!! Well written piece of writing. Keep writing!! Much love and hugs to you and to ALL! |
Date: 12/13/2003 11:06:00 PM
From Authorid: 23101
Wow. A lot of anger expressed Shazy, I hope you know you are important, and then without you, life would just not be the same. Sure you have problems.. but you will find solutions. Just don't give up. |
Date: 12/14/2003 6:46:00 AM
From Authorid: 23886
Its not finished =/ |
Date: 12/14/2003 6:46:00 AM
From Authorid: 23886
=o !! |
Date: 12/14/2003 1:39:00 PM
From Authorid: 62486
all I have to say is WOW!!!! THAT IS SO GOOD!!!! WOW!!!! GOOD JOB!!! KEEP WRITTING!!!! |
Date: 12/15/2003 5:46:00 AM
From Authorid: 8024
wow very heartfelt emotion in this piece ... Your words carry me t osad place here where ther isn't much trust and and heat that longs to be loved .... |
Date: 12/16/2003 11:02:00 AM
From Authorid: 10110
Very good! I loved this one. |