Date: 12/12/2003 10:02:00 AM
From Authorid: 60018
Awesome (duh) Glad you're here finally :-D Took me a good month or two to convince you Now you'll actually get some feedback on your poetry.  |
Date: 12/12/2003 10:03:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62492
Thanks hon. Yeah it took a bit of convincing but I'm here. Hope you all enjoy my writing. |
Date: 12/12/2003 1:38:00 PM
From Authorid: 18169
awwww! that's so sad! well written too. i like it alot. keep up the good work!  |
Date: 12/13/2003 8:09:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62492
Thanks I have a couple I'm workign on still. |
Date: 12/14/2003 7:30:00 AM
From Authorid: 28363
very artistic technique (ty 4 sharing)  |
Date: 12/14/2003 8:05:00 AM
From Authorid: 23959
awww that's so sad But written soooo well! Looking forward to reading more of your work!  |
Date: 12/23/2003 10:42:00 AM
From Authorid: 23101
Buddha9902, your poem is wonderful. Lately I have been reading about a ton of hurt people, some from girlfriends or boyfriends, and it really isn't very holiday spirity. I read in your profile you write about things that happened to you at the recent moment.. So what was going on when you wrote this? LOL.. How long does it take you to write your poems?  |
Date: 12/23/2003 3:55:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 62492
Well when I wrote this poem I had just heard that my mom wasnt doing well at the hospital and there was a chance that she might not make it. As that has not happened :-) and she is now home!! I generally write things in about maybe 5-20 minutes. I know I dont sit for to long on them but that is the way I tend to do it. When something hits me that is generally when it is written. -buddha9902 |