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"Jacuzzi suite".....kronk

  Author:  21435  Category:(Poetry) Created:(10/19/2003 7:01:00 PM)
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Tease you, baby.

Lead you, baby.

Do whatever it takes,

to appease you, baby.


Put a disc in the wave radio.

Open up all the doors in the suite.

Wow! Where's you learn to move like that, baby?

Oooooo, baby, but you're "light on your feet."



Don't worry 'bout the neighbors.

Cause, baby, we ain't got none-

No one but me and you, baby.

All we "gotta" do, is have fun


We'll "pony" down the entrance way.

"Chug-a-lug," down to the den-

"Rock steady" round the couch, oh yeah!

Can you dance to "Mrs. Robinson?"


When I'm hanging out with you, baby,

I feel all of ten feet tall.

Woooooh..Take it easy, baby!

You'll have me "bouncing off the wall."


I'll draw a little water. Gonna make it plenty hot!

Ce Roc, Be Bop, Le Roc...What! What not!

Come on in. The water's fine, babe.

You wanna dance some more?..Say what! :)



Good music, cold wine and hot water go well together :)


Could using the word "baby" nine times in the same poem be considered "over-kill?"? Hmmmmmmmm? :)














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Date: 10/19/2003 7:17:00 PM  From Authorid: 33286    lol, made me think of the Big Bopper man...cool tune buddy... (boy is this site sluggish today)  
Date: 10/19/2003 7:19:00 PM  From Authorid: 8024    wow kronk this one carries a beat almost ... a fn poem I really enjoyed the read ... I like that part Don't worry 'bout the neighbors.

Cause, baby, we ain't got none- letting loose @ the house .. thanks for the smiles and by the way 28 your way !!!
  
Date: 10/19/2003 11:38:00 PM  From Authorid: 21867    Kronk on the Mac...yeah buddy...flow that game Fine rhymes bro. Peace,  
Date: 10/20/2003 4:00:00 AM  From Authorid: 42945    I dont think "baby" 9 times, hurts this poem Kronk, just getting your point across lol!!! and yes you are so right..good music, cold wine and hot water are a terrific combination...hugs  
Date: 10/20/2003 5:44:00 AM  From Authorid: 46320    Using the word 10 times would be overkill, 9 is just right. I loved it Baby! Be Good...  
Date: 10/20/2003 5:49:00 AM  From Authorid: 28946    You made me have a big smile on my face cause I'm remembering a similar special time with an old love. Thanks for reminding me of a good time in my life.  
Date: 10/20/2003 8:36:00 AM  From Authorid: 59418    Nice work daddy!! Saying "baby" 9 times just made ya sound very happy and in love lol   
Date: 10/20/2003 4:51:00 PM  From Authorid: 57116    make that ten........oh yeah, Baby, I'm on my way...LOL!!!  
Date: 10/20/2003 5:48:00 PM  From Authorid: 56840    Hehe, this had me smiling after the first stanza! Way cool, fun poem, Kronk. Keep writing..  
Date: 10/21/2003 5:32:00 AM  From Authorid: 56489    Hey baby, you know how to write to bring happy thoughts, great job!  

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