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Date: 9/16/2003 8:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
Oh that was beautiful Kronkmeister! I remember when I was in Elementary school, one of my teachers made all of us go outside and sit on the grass. We had to close our eyes and once we heard a sound, we had to write it down on a piece of paper. For some reason, this memory has been popping up a lot in my head lately. I think of it as a little reminder to take life slow and appreciate what's around you. Enjoying the free things in life! Loved it Kronk.   |
Date: 9/16/2003 10:07:00 PM
From Authorid: 20750
Beautiful Kronk! As always!  |
Date: 9/16/2003 10:35:00 PM
From Authorid: 42945
just love this Kronk, the simple things and thought in life are the best...hugs  |
Date: 9/16/2003 10:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 28946
The stuff dreams are made of helps keep real life away in our slumber. Thank goodness for my dream man. lol. Good poetry as always Kronk.  |
Date: 9/17/2003 10:15:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
When I was kid I visited a friend of my mothers on a reservation in north dakota, I was only like 6 or so. I don't remember alot about the visit except that no one really played with me except a few of the kids that lived with my mom's friend. It was like an orphanage on the reservation almost. But before I left this old guy, and I mean old, came to see me. He said he wanted to see the white girl all the kids were talking about. Because the younger children were fightened that I was a ghost or a witch. He passed his hands over my eyes and smiled and said "this is no ghost". That was it. This poem kind of reminds me of him. ..."this is no ghost"...those words mean so much to me for some reason......<RegretfulHalo>  |
Date: 9/17/2003 3:29:00 PM
From Authorid: 57116
I'm there!!!  |
Date: 9/18/2003 1:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Mmmmmm... That was like drinking a nice tall glass of rasberry soda with ice cubes, good to the end! Way cool poem! Keep writing..  |
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Date: 5/24/2005 12:51:00 PM ( Admin-DNL )
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