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Date: 9/16/2003 2:22:00 PM
From Authorid: 62222
I know you this might seem weird, but this poem almost sounds...sarcastic to me. That's not a bad thing. It just makes me think of someone who is fed up.....*shrugs* Ah, well I am bookmarking it all the same. Thank you for sharing.<RegretfulHalo>  |
Date: 9/16/2003 2:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 55386
Hmm. I sort of agree with Regretful Halo,but also disagree sort of too. See, I can see how she can see it's sarcastic, but I think it could also be a serious literal poem. See, it could mean that she killed herself in the poem or something....I don't know. *shrugs* Leaves me confused. I like that. Great job and keep writing!!!  |
Date: 9/19/2003 8:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 42945
I think this poem is sad but written very well just the same, he/she hurt him/her and he/she is leaving this letter to remind her/him of what he/she forced him/her to do...thats how I interpret it...good one..hugs  |
Date: 9/22/2003 12:10:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
I liked this, though I think the last verse could be better... stronger somehow.  |
Date: 4/4/2004 3:44:00 AM
From Authorid: 23886
Its....sad! *cries*  |
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39350 Category:(Poetry) Created:(9/16/2003 2:13:00 PM)