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Unfinished or worthless poetry-Gothic Angel

  Author:  55386  Category:(Poetry) Created:(9/15/2003 6:38:00 PM)
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(I wrote this a while ago for my parents)
Rebellion

I am a creation full of rebellion only because of the way you have treated me. When I'm good I get no attention, but when I'm bad I get all the attention I want. I need attention. I am still very much a child. Do you understand that? Dad a phone call doesn't do nothing, okay? It doens't help that you're gone and you hurt my mom so much. Mom it doesn't help that you choose your boyfriend over me or you put me in danger by meeting him off the computer. I guess I could see past it all, if you would give me time. Dad, why do you always come down with Thea? It's you I want to see, it's you I love! Mom, you don't even do anything with me! How can you be parents. I don't deserve this. Here me? I DON'T DESERVE THIS!

Somehow I'll always end up
With my heart broken
My tears running wild
With hurtful words spoken

Send me an angel for I need one rigt now

Every time I see your face I feel as if I'm drowning

YOU LIED

The leaves they fall
From the bare trees
Free from being whole
Broken apart

The leaves are so small
As soon as they leave
The tree.....

**Some are really short, but its just some unfinished and worthless poetry and words. Thanks for reading!**

-Heather AKA Gothic Angel

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Date: 9/15/2003 7:11:00 PM  From Authorid: 57116    "Poetry is never unfinished or worthless, if it comes from the heart"...and that is a quote you can post...from the worst poet...Mustang-Renee  
Date: 9/15/2003 8:39:00 PM  From Authorid: 54707    Sometime's it's scary how we can relate. What you wrote for your parents i could write word for word to mine. Even down to the line that reads, "Mom it doesn't help that you choose your boyfriend over me or you put me in danger by meeting him off the computer." And no is ever unfinished, and there are no worthless words, even if they stand with but a few others. Your works, even the so-called "unfinished" works above are covered with emotion. You have given me inspiration to post someone my "unfinished works". Keep Writing, Even if some don't get "finished".  
Date: 9/16/2003 1:41:00 AM  From Authorid: 15157    A poem can be a couple of lines and still be considered poetry..Good job!  
Date: 9/16/2003 3:31:00 AM  From Authorid: 28670    Sweetheart-(If I may call you that now) I truly don't feel that any of this poetry is worthless. You've been hurt, as I have. I think it's the best thing to work your pain out somehow. Whatever venue you choose to vent I support it. See that it's a healthy thing. I find your poetry beautiful. If you ever want to swap, let me know. Take it easy. Talk to you soon. Love,  
Date: 9/16/2003 9:51:00 PM  From Authorid: 45630    It's not worthless at all. Sometimes unfinished work is the best because it really shows the flow of your emotions. Well done!  
Date: 9/17/2003 11:50:00 AM  From Authorid: 45684    This was not worthless. Whenever you share your feelings, it means something. I thought it was very good, and not pretentious like a lot of poetry that I seem to run into these days. Good job.  

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