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I'll take your sorrows

  Author:  57222  Category:(Poetry) Created:(9/14/2003 9:35:00 PM)
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Cry a puddle for me, so I can wash off my sins
I will dip my hands into your sorrow, take your troubles in
Get rid of all your sadness, put it into me
Whenever you go crazy, give me all your insanity
Don't tell me no, just cry a puddle here on the floor
Make it into a river, make an ocean, I'll be your shore
The waves will crash upon me, I'll consume it all
You just be the ocean floor, never have to fall
I'll feel the wind upon me, the rain from the sky
Just cry a little puddle, drain out your bloodshot eyes
Just cry for a couple hours, let me have everything you feel
Once it's all over, happiness will be all that's real
I'll deal with the melancholy of the tears from you
You can smile and I'll cry all the times you don't have to
When you feel any sadness, just go to my puddle of emotion for me to consume
Wash it away from your soul, close the door and leave the room
Let me be there alone to take away your sorrows
And if you feel too tired just come to me tomorrow
I'll be waiting here, forever so once again
I can dip my hands into your puddle full of sorrows and take your troubles in

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Date: 9/15/2003 9:36:00 AM  From Authorid: 62222    Wow, this is a really awesome poem! I truly enjoyed this. I particularly enjoyed the water imagery in it, and the many references to washing away and being washed away. <RegretfulHalo>  
Date: 9/15/2003 11:48:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 57222    Thanks Regretful!   
Date: 9/15/2003 12:25:00 PM  From Authorid: 55386    I never ever think that I will stop loving and reading your poems! I love them! They are so very well done, and are just amazing! I love them so much. This was so good! I thought I was about to cry because not many people would do this for a person, or write about it. It was amazing. Great job and keep writing!  
Date: 9/25/2003 1:37:00 PM  From Authorid: 56840    Wow.. This poem has a depth to it that is simply amazing.. I feel this.. I know how it feels..to take someone's sorrows..and I know how it feels to have a friend who can take yours.. Wow..your words are so poignant. *bookmark*  

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