Date: 9/2/2003 2:50:00 AM
From Authorid: 33925
Oh Agent Smith this is a powerful poem..wow...I truly understand these feelings all too well..You have expressed in poem the way I, myself feel at times. |
Date: 9/2/2003 3:39:00 AM
From Authorid: 30747
Awe AS that is very deep. I felt the pain too. You've touched an emotion all too familiar. *big, big hugs* for a job very well done. |
Date: 9/2/2003 6:26:00 AM
From Authorid: 35160
i love the way u wrote this poem. absolutely wonderful. |
Date: 9/2/2003 6:41:00 AM
From Authorid: 13138
Agent Smith, only you can put such a sadness and life experience into beautiful poetry. Hopefully life brightens up a bit for you really soon. Take care, |
Date: 9/2/2003 7:14:00 AM
From Authorid: 33286
living it dude, feeling it and living it, good job bro. |
Date: 9/2/2003 7:46:00 AM
From Authorid: 27534
Well done..........I keep thinking about those Halloween movies....with the mask.....without the killing......I understand the need to cut off emotions...... |
Date: 9/2/2003 10:43:00 AM
From Authorid: 11341
What an awesome poem, I am here in tears. Whether it be family or a partner or a pet love hurts! I too wish for my heart to stop. |
Date: 9/2/2003 3:25:00 PM
From Authorid: 45367
Wow, you blew me away. That is a wonderful poem. |
Date: 9/2/2003 7:33:00 PM
From Authorid: 32806
{{{{{{{HUG}}}}}}} <<< don't take that wrong now!!!!!! Awesome words Agent Smith, let those feelings roll off your fingers..... |
Date: 9/2/2003 9:04:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi Guys, I would love to reply to each one of you personally...but I'm really not in the mindframe to do so right now...hope you understand. Please know I treasure all your words...they are very much appreciated...and I thank each of you. Peace, |
Date: 9/2/2003 9:22:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Well done, Agent Smith. The only good thing about such moods is: They teach us patience and hone that thing called, disdain. Both valuable qualities, I think. Thanks for the fine read. Write on... |
Date: 9/2/2003 10:31:00 PM
From Authorid: 42945
awww hun, a great, but sad piece of writing here my kiwi friend, I can feel the pain in the words....hugs |
Date: 9/22/2003 12:36:00 AM
From Authorid: 17156
Bidz I know this feeling but I have never read it described as it truly feels. you will never stop amaizing me with your beautiful and soul filled words raw human emotion in the form of a rose. Many HUGS Love, |
Date: 9/29/2003 10:23:00 AM
From Authorid: 53900
Beautiful words Agent Smith...I know the feelings behind this poem all too well. Hope things begin looking up for you |
Date: 10/7/2003 12:38:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
That fifth stanza really hit me.. Your usage of words is amazing.. Nope, didn't depress me at all, but it made me think a lot.. Keep writing.. |
Date: 10/7/2003 1:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 62222
ah..."tu mais fait ma couer"...I wanted to turn my heart off once...couldn't figure out how to get it back on...had to change the battery it was a wretched affair...awesome poem...I am hunting for more..<RegretfulHalo> |
Date: 10/7/2003 9:25:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi Kronk, Forgive my taking so long to reply. Your words on my poems are always a joy...and as usual your message is a wise one and one that shall be taken onboard. Many thanks. Peace, |
Date: 10/7/2003 9:27:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi Zema, my dear Aussie Friend...yes, the words may be sad, but within them is a greater understanding, and acceptance that will bring peace long since forgotten. Cheers, |
Date: 10/7/2003 9:28:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi SweetV, M my dear friend...yes, I know you understand these words...and for that I am sorry that your own heart holds within it memories that aren't only joyous. Thank you for your words as always. Peace, |
Date: 10/7/2003 9:30:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi Jessica, Whats that saying "When you are down there is nowhere else to go but up"? There is positivity even in the most negative, just have to look harder for it...as I am...hopefully it'll be found. Thank you so much for reading and replying. Peace, |
Date: 10/7/2003 9:31:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi LadyBlaze, oppsie...making people think, is that a good thing or a bad thing?? Hehehe. Cheers for your kind and much appreciated words. Peace, |
Date: 10/7/2003 9:32:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 21867
Hi RegretfulHalo, Hehehe...I love your reply...its so true. Sometimes when we shut off its near impossible to switch back on...requires a complete engine overhaul as it siezes due to inactivity Thanks for ya reply. Peace, |